That was one well-written poem! Utterly fantastic! I haven't read poetry since I was under my other fanfiction name, but now I see why I was so obsessed with it! You really captured their characters in such a short form of writing. Beautifully created. I can tell you worked hard.

! ah, it's simply wonderful .

and in haiku form (which i like), is something new that I haven't seen yet.

a million, million praises to thou. :]

( i was actually counting the syllables at first, and it was really fun!)

Nice fic. Very interesting and unique and I loved the way you wrote it in haiku format. Unique but everyone was still in character. Good job*

That was great! I never actually read a story in haiku before. I really loved it! Great job!

That was awesome. I love the whole haiku thing.

Even if you didn't make it into a haiku, i still would have loved it. And...

Hiyoshi is just jealous, "He'll turn and bite you."

Well, he turned... and bit hiyoshi, not choutarou. haha! (not literally of course, because that'd be...weird)

Nice!