Disturbing, sick and completely f@#ked up, and this coming from a guy who watched 'The Human Centipede' back to back.

Though it keeps me up at night wondering what kind of mind can contemplate this kind of stuff... and in such detail. I still have to applaud you and hope you'll update someday.

What does that say about me?

I LOVE THIS. This has the be the single best fanfictin I have ever read, and I'm so sad that you never finished it and probably never will, seeing as it hasn't been updated in almost 7 years. (wow)But it was so fantastically written for the times it was being updated.

If you were an author I would definitely buy your book.

I know this hasn't been updated in YEARS but I had to leave a review and say how well written this is and that I'm gonna keep reading.

This story is absolutely amazing. I know you haven't updated it in awhile, but is it officially discontinued? And if it's not too much to ask could I know what direction you were planning to go in? I'm really sorry- I just know I won't be able to stop thinking about this one for quite a long time.

hey...wow...OMG...this is the best batman story ever...its mysterious, clever, and scary...its so good...not only the story but also you are so great at writing the characters, they are so rich and the dialouge is even better...im surprised you dont have a million reviews...its so fantastic you should seriously consider writing detective novels or better yet batman comics...oh and i have to mention that i love robin in this fic, i just really love him...i dunno the way you wrote his character is fantastic...thank you for writing such an awesome story im so happy that i finally found a really good fanfic to read...yay...ok so maybe its been years since you've updated...ok im going to ask...no beg for you to please continue and finish this fic im dying to see what happens...dying!...anywho i wish you could tell me where you get your inspiration from cuz this is one damn good fic...alrighty take care and plz update soon

p.s. hey do you mind if i recommennd your story up on my profile, sometimes people ask for a good story and it would be nice to tell them about yurs...only if its cool with you...let me know if you can

Wow. I had someone rec this despite it being unfinished, and thought I could take that. But I really do wish there were more . . . it's a well written story. You capture Batman and Robin so well.

Livi

Wow, this is just... beyond disturbing. It's dark and creepy and utterly fascinating. The way the Corinthian just zeroed in on Robin in this chapter and the last one just freaks me out. Really, this is gonna give me nightmares and I just saw Watchmen last night.

I know it's been years but I BEG you to continue. Because, honestly, I don't know if I can continue reading this knowing that I'm only going to be left hanging in the end. Please.

Ha! Very nice x-files reference. xD

Just font this story. I like it. I hope you finish it some day.

well done and extraordinarilly creepy. I can't even imagine how this would work out in the end, which is a sign of very good writing, in my mind. I assume it's dead,so I won't pester you with requests for more, but I did enjoy it, and have a great deal of respect for your skill at creating such a complex plot, and such an eerie mood, while still creating complex, believable characters. Thanks for writing and sharing.

I feel like just spouting gibberish instead of real words for this review, because apparently 'speaking in tonuges' would get my point across better. But, seeing as I don't believe in that, I'll refrain.

This story is amazing.

That's a poor sum up, compared to what was going through my head mentally, but it's much more understandable.

Gah! Next chapter!

A very interesting story, I do hope that you continue with it. Lovely insight into the characters personalities, and very imaginative ideas to bits of the utility belt. Just a thought, but if this is following the comic in general, is the before or after No Man's Land? Otherwise, there are a few minor spelling errors, but nothing that would murder a sentence. Keep up the wonderful work! :)

I am going to temporarily throw away my pride and dignity to beg you to PLEASE update ASAP! I accidently stumbled and fell over this story and I haven't been able to stop thinking about it! You have developed a magnificent plot and a great sense of the characters and I cannot wait to read more!

this is such a good story so far you need to update soon.

Yes, I AM about to beg you for more: will you kindly update this? I just discovered this story a few days ago, and I just finished reading it. I can't imagine what it's like for the poor people who have been waiting for the past two years. And I don't WANT to imagine, either! Please continue this amazing story! :)