hey...wow...OMG...this is the best batman story ever...its mysterious, clever, and scary...its so good...not only the story but also you are so great at writing the characters, they are so rich and the dialouge is even better...im surprised you dont have a million reviews...its so fantastic you should seriously consider writing detective novels or better yet batman comics...oh and i have to mention that i love robin in this fic, i just really love him...i dunno the way you wrote his character is fantastic...thank you for writing such an awesome story im so happy that i finally found a really good fanfic to read...yay...ok so maybe its been years since you've updated...ok im going to ask...no beg for you to please continue and finish this fic im dying to see what happens...dying!...anywho i wish you could tell me where you get your inspiration from cuz this is one damn good fic...alrighty take care and plz update soon

p.s. hey do you mind if i recommennd your story up on my profile, sometimes people ask for a good story and it would be nice to tell them about yurs...only if its cool with you...let me know if you can

Wow. I had someone rec this despite it being unfinished, and thought I could take that. But I really do wish there were more . . . it's a well written story. You capture Batman and Robin so well.

Livi

Wow, this is just... beyond disturbing. It's dark and creepy and utterly fascinating. The way the Corinthian just zeroed in on Robin in this chapter and the last one just freaks me out. Really, this is gonna give me nightmares and I just saw Watchmen last night.

I know it's been years but I BEG you to continue. Because, honestly, I don't know if I can continue reading this knowing that I'm only going to be left hanging in the end. Please.

Ha! Very nice x-files reference. xD

Just font this story. I like it. I hope you finish it some day.

well done and extraordinarilly creepy. I can't even imagine how this would work out in the end, which is a sign of very good writing, in my mind. I assume it's dead,so I won't pester you with requests for more, but I did enjoy it, and have a great deal of respect for your skill at creating such a complex plot, and such an eerie mood, while still creating complex, believable characters. Thanks for writing and sharing.

I feel like just spouting gibberish instead of real words for this review, because apparently 'speaking in tonuges' would get my point across better. But, seeing as I don't believe in that, I'll refrain.

This story is amazing.

That's a poor sum up, compared to what was going through my head mentally, but it's much more understandable.

Gah! Next chapter!

A very interesting story, I do hope that you continue with it. Lovely insight into the characters personalities, and very imaginative ideas to bits of the utility belt. Just a thought, but if this is following the comic in general, is the before or after No Man's Land? Otherwise, there are a few minor spelling errors, but nothing that would murder a sentence. Keep up the wonderful work! :)

I am going to temporarily throw away my pride and dignity to beg you to PLEASE update ASAP! I accidently stumbled and fell over this story and I haven't been able to stop thinking about it!! You have developed a magnificent plot and a great sense of the characters and I cannot wait to read more!

this is such a good story so far you need to update soon.

Yes, I AM about to beg you for more: will you kindly update this?! I just discovered this story a few days ago, and I just finished reading it. I can't imagine what it's like for the poor people who have been waiting for the past two years. And I don't WANT to imagine, either!! Please continue this amazing story! :)

Thanks for letting us know that you are still working on this terrific story! Yeah!

Thank you for the update and the reassurance. Looking forward to more from you!

PLEASE! Update! This is my third Review to you and all I´ve written, told the same: PLEASE update a NEW Chapter! Please, ´cause I wanna know the End of this super amazing Story! THANKS!

This is such a great story! It's been two long years since an update. It would be great if you would just let us know if you are continuing or not-or even better, an update.