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Mrs.iloveallthejonasbrothersdu
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
loved it:)
princetongirl
2007-09-28 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
Angela
2007-05-29 . chapter 2
this is really good. I hope you make more good ones like this. Ja Ne
Zuzzeroo
2007-05-01 . chapter 1
2 thumbs up!! =-)
Binx23
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Hey there! I would like to commend you on your stories for I must admit that I like them. I've read all of your pieces actually and my favorite is "One Weird Family". I just wrote to say that I found an error in you story "Cold Rain"-- you said that there home was in London but that can't be because they live in Canada.. also, you reffered to it as their 'childhood home', it is for Derek but not to Casey 'cause she just moved there. Also, I have to advice you to use better emphasis on you time frames-- what I mean is don't just use italics 'cause it gets really confusing, just some friendly advice on a potentially great author :>

And oh yeah, on your story, "Midnight Dance"...I'm not very sure but I think you got a fact wrong, Derek and Casey didn't exactly know each other before their parents got married I think... Bear in mind that I've only seen like 5 episodes so, if I'm wrong then I'm sorry I wasted space...

Buh-bye!
druccillamalfoyrox
2007-04-03 . chapter 1
This is really good!
good job!
choir-freak
2007-03-31 . chapter 2
Yeah, that was pretty much ausome. I especially liked the last line. It was great. This was a really good one-shot. Everything was wrapped up nicely.
Crimson and Chrome 42
2007-03-29 . chapter 2
This is really good, I would like to know more about how their family will react to the situation.
candypir
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
i liked it, a lot.
anonymous
2007-03-24 . chapter 2
great story!!
Nunda
2007-03-23 . chapter 2
I reviewed the first time but I'm reviewing again to say I can't wait to read your next story. You've got me all excited about it so you better post it. ;)
Cozmo
2007-03-23 . chapter 2
Amazing. That's all I can say. It was beautiful. I loved it!

CoZmO
kapers in pink
2007-03-23 . chapter 2
It was good, and well written
But your desperate plea for reviews is a little too much. Take it from someone who doesn't get a lot of reviews... Write because you love to, not because other people encourage you to.
RAWR-IKICKBUTT
2007-03-22 . chapter 2
Again, I loved it.
i read it again ahaha.
ahaha, you can read my
last review to know what
i thought =P
NEW STORY? SOUNDS GOOD.
zannessa101
2007-03-22 . chapter 2
Update soon i love it!
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