I dont know how many time i have read this story over to many to count its GREATEST STORY EVER I HAVE READ on LH FanFic i dont know why buit it has such depth even that I woud like to write some LH FanFic of my own...(wich will meaby happen since i'm to lazy to try+uni)
All i can say is thanks you for this GREAT story i wont forget it for years.
heck i dont know what to write in review since i have hundreds of thoths going in seconds in my head this story for me was spetaciluar.
Thank you again for it hope you make some continuing whit some choices were meaby Keitaro gets back memorys and... dont know, but meaby you can think of something if you want to.

This fic is just amazing... I just finished reading it and wow there're no words for the emotions it gave me.
I know it's a little late for congratulate you for this astonishing writing of yours. There's just one little nagging voice torturing me that'll forever ask: How Tsuruko and Keitaro ended as lovers? and What do happen from now on?

This fic made me sad, bitter and angsty. How perfect. I happen to like feasting upon the darkness of human soul, so I quite enjoyed this. Good job~~

your story is very touching. i hope that keitaro can continue the love he has for motoko, so i hope for a keitaro/motoko pairing in this story. although he's in the past i pray that this will be a keitaro/motoko pairing.

Truely an excellent story. I must applaude your ideas for this story. The drama forced on Keitaro, Motoko, and those around them allowed me to really immerse myself within the plot. I loved the change that Motoko went through and the ensuing conflicts that followed(Shinobu's death made me sad though).
The ending was surprising with Tsuruko loving Keitaro and traveling to the past to save him, but it was a welcome surprise.
Anyway, excellent piece of work.
Abyss Key

WOW! Great Story. I have been reading this story and i must say it was something wonderfull. It is sad that it has an end. Please write more LH Storys.
It is a Masterpiece. You have touched my heart.
Thanks.

I just got done reading your shattered story...wow it was amazing

wow... this fic's ending was really emotionally trying. It was a very good fic and i'm glad i took the time to find it again after just reading the first chapter...
aDios for now...
and keep up the amazing work...

AGX[TAIL]

wow, when i got to the part about Keitaro having to remember everything, it was like someone knocked the wind out of me. I honestly cannot think of a more sadistic torture. Then i got that feeling again towards the end, when Tusurko's husband menchoned her going to help a past lover who no longer remembered her. It was like, gasp, my breath was gone, everything fell into place, all those odd stares, everything. I am taking a creative writing class, and my professor stresses that we need to have a "surprising, but inevitable ending" and you hit that sucker on the head. As i read it, i realized that some part of my mind had seen this coming, but had been too shocked to share with the rest of me. lol, that may not make much sense, but it is just so hard to put these emotions and feelings of wonder and awe this work inspires into word. Thanks, great story!

well i'm reviewing again but couldn't be bothered to log in, lol, well yet again you have astonished me with this story, i think was well written and captivated me all the way in my year long job teaching English in China, damn you've really perked up my otherwise dull day, i bet those shinobu lovers will probably complain but it all was fine in the end so maybe they,ll go easy on you, he he.
only thing i was little lost with was i can guess what the Keitaro Tsuruko story was but a little background would of cemented it, otherwise a brilliant story, till next time if you plan to update that is, if not ill look forward to your next story
LYTHER

Wow that was great...

I had a big gripe that you seemed to have taken the easy way out concerning the ending, but that bit about Tsuruko was a nice touch.

Although that does add more problems to the story since you really didn't elaborate more on the whole situation. The ending seemed to have been just pulled out of nowhere.

This won't be a complete story unless you do a sort of prologue on the events that occurred with Tsuruko and Keitaro.

I'm hoping for that prologue now...=P

'till then

Absolutely beautiful. No one can write such a moving story like you can. This is truly a masterpiece. Well done.

Wow, that last patrt was unexpected to say the least, and was not seeing Keitaro having been saved by Tsuruko, as well as what happened with he and Motoko, and some of the characters being hurt, like Shinobu came right out of the blue for me. A great story, bittersweet, and warm, and just well done.

I´m impressed, this is a really really good one. I hope you continue your writing especially for the Love Hina section.

A brilliant and moving story. Very unique and a joy to read.
The ending was bitter-sweet, but I'm sure things will turn out fine for everyone in the end. Tsuruko and Keitaro are strong-willed characters after all.

Look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers.