Wow! Seriously interested, please write more!?

Wow, i like this whole one thing! I hope you decide to add more, like...a plot?? It would be a great fic.

aw sounds good keep going

wow, well written.

Finally! A 300 fic. I hope you keep going.

very powerful

I loved this. The words you used are incredilby effective. Please continue!

I like it. Simple, easy to remember. Ha, sorry, but with the debut of the Pirates 3 trailer (wasn't it freaking awesome?!) I'm back to quoting the movies. But really, very nice.

I loved it m'dear. Also helps that I saw 300 the other day. You really should continue this.

This is a very intriguing start, I would love to see a continuation of this story. You could make it before the movie or after, I really hope you will continue this!

"Sibyls with their secrets silently singing and prophets alike." wonderful alliteration!
anyway, i actually like this start. the only thing i'm curious about is how to pronounce achlys. is it like achilles or ah-kill-is?
anyway-anyway, should definitely continue this

I've been searching for a 300 fanfic, and I'm really glad I stumbled across this. It's almost like a poem or an introduction to a story. I hope you continue with this idea.

i havent seen 300 but i'm waiting for it to come out in australia xD *smiles* can't wait.

i wanna c how this turns out coz ur my fav writer and i'll read anything u write :D ur the best.

L0ve jubil!