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alana124pyro 2008-04-18 ch 4,	abusehmm...this sounds good! ^.^ i was wondering when u'd make the connection btwn Sakura and Gaara ^.^ ...now if only we could find about Miss Crazy Little Girl Who Set Gaara Free, Just To Attempt To Kill Him girl. ^_- keep it up and update soon! rock on and payce out
Malak Akane 2007-05-03 ch 4,	abuseYes, it rains in the desert every so often. (Once every several years, I believe.) Oh my... I've been a neglectful reviewer, haven't I? Sorry about not reviewing earlier; life and my own story have recently been taking up most of my time. Four years, Gaara!? Wow... now I'm dying to know what happened! And your OC keeps getting more and more interesting. Freeing Gaara to kill him... failing to do so... releasing the pyschopathic beast onto civilization... Just a question, what timeline is your story? I mean, obviously Gaara isn't the Kazekage (Unless somehow he is... 0_o). I like how you described Sakura's fall from the ledge (/Almost orgasmic,/ Sakura nervously chuckled.), because it was very realistic with how someone in that situation would feel. Yeah, of course there's going to be terror, but the adrenaline rushing through one's veins would feel almost like a high. And, once again, we're left with another cliffie. sigh Why must you leave me craving for more? ~Kodu
TwilightSnowStar 2007-04-27 ch 4,	abuseFOUR YEARS? WHAT HAPPENED!? GAARA!
An Idiot 2007-04-27 ch 4,	abuseUPDATE! XD And it's not Genjutsu. I'd leave a longer review, but it's dinner time now... :) ciao
TwilightSnowStar 2007-04-21 ch 3,	abuseUPDATE!
TwilightSnowStar 2007-04-21 ch 1,	abuseThat was amazing! Really, you made Gaara sound so...Gaara!
BloodySakuraBlossom 2007-04-12 ch 3,	abusethis story is so awsome!! please update son !adds to favs
no comment people 2007-04-07 ch 3,	abuseits kinda confusing like in the first part with gaara who captured him and why? but its still good.
Gennerator 2007-04-06 ch 3,	abuseSix reviews? Wow, this needs more credit. Your portrayal of Gaara is AMAZING. I've always thought writing about insanity is hard, but wow, you just did it perfectly. And you did it with good grammar, too! This story satisfies all criteria! To top everything off, it's your first fanfic. Seriously, I'm amazed. Great, great job. (Secretly hoping this is turning into a GaaSaku...)
An Idiot 2007-03-25 ch 3,	abuseStill as random as ever I see. Gen still lurves your writing style. Update soon, my friend. ... lol... mastercard.
Malak Akane 2007-03-23 ch 3,	abuseHeh, cliffie. One word could describe this chapter: INTENSE. The beginning was very heartwrenching; I could almost feel the pain and hate of the little girl forced to be a container. The line that stuck out to me most was: "Her purpose in life now? Dramatically changed in one moment to be no more than a container." Now, THAT got me thinking. How sad. Something else I liked was the elevator scene and how you described it. Good authors can create worlds and situations of their own that fit their story well. GREAT authors take something real and twist it just enough to be amusing. We've all had to ride in an elevator, and we've all had to experience some nasty people on the way up or down. What made your scene funny is the fact that Sakura was dead tired, and she encountered several nasty people instead of just one. You stretched the idea of something real just enough to make it amusing. Right now, I feel that your Gaara is perfectly in character. He IS insane, but more often than not many authors try and blame that insanity strictly on Shukaku (I myself included...). But, when you think about it, the demon IS a part of Gaara, in a way. Sakura fell off a building... Heh, not much to say about that. Though the sand did confuse me, I figure that's just foreshadowing, and I'll find out why it's there soon enough. Stupid bird...caused all kinds of trouble. ;) Well, keep up the great work! ~Kodu
Malak Akane 2007-03-20 ch 2,	abuseI have to admit, I was really turned off by the short chapters of your fanfiction, and the fact that you said it was your first. Usually, when an author can't write much, it means they don't have much to say, or that their fic is terribly lacking in detail and character development. And when they're new to the world, they're just beginning to hone their skills as a writer and usually won't start out writing something good. So, naturally, when I saw how little you wrote, and that you were new, I feared I might have stumbled upon another bad fanfic. I almost pressed the back button - almost -, but your opening lines caught my attention, and I stuck it out...through 2 chapters. And now, I am immensely, irrevocably happy I actually read what you have written. Some short-chaptered stories, you see, are bad. A rare few - likes yours - are mindblowingly good. I think I'm in shock at how deep and emotional your writing is, and I feel so guilty for even thinking your fiction could have possibly been bad! I saw no mistakes; only perfect characterization, a vaguely developing plot, and a style of writing that has the reader craving more. All of your characters felt so REAL, it was unbelievable! I felt as if I were a part of your story; a bystander watching as Gaara spiralled down into madness, as Sakura stressed over a medical exam. I, personally, think you deserve many more reviews than you've gotten! In your profile you said you were new to the whole fanfiction thing, so here's a bit of advice: Don't get discouraged if you don't have a lot of reviews at first. I promise you, it doesn't mean people aren't reading! They're watching you to see if what your write is worth their time. And, by what you've written so far - only 2 chapters! -, I've decided this fiction is WELL worth my time! To be 14 years old (You did say you were 14, right?) and to write as well as you do is an incredible gift. I NEVER wrote as good as you did at your age, and I know some people older than you who probably WILL NEVER write that well. So, I would absolutely LOVE to see you continue with this fiction. And when (Read it, "WHEN" not "IF") you do, I promise to review as much as I can! I understand completely how uplifting another's opinion can be. Sorry for the long rant, but I'm hoping for an update soon! ~Kodu
An Idiot 2007-03-16 ch 2,	abuseVery good. Gen lurves your writing style and is waiting for more.
An Idiot 2007-03-16 ch 1,	abuseVery good my friend. Good start, very descriptive and intruguing. Good work.
xxtokidokixx 2007-03-15 ch 2,	abuseOh! I really liked the whole Gaara going mental in the first chapter - the description was AMAZING! It was soo good! Love the way this story is going too, and I can't wait to read more so update! xxtokidokxx

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