I could totally see this as an actual episode! Great!

Oh man, the twins are just too much! :D

Aww! It's so cute and creative!!

lol! I love it!

It definitely sells.

This has one of the better characterizations I've seen around here. Granted, I'm knew (to the fandom, I mean) and this IS a OneShot but...

I REALLY like it. Plus, I could totally see the twins coming up with this as oppose to Tamaki.

Nee, would you consider writing a sequel to this? Maybe a couple of months/a year later and how they've fallen into their respective roles. Or, or, you could make this a series of oneshots of their developing relationship. This is the start. And then how things progress from here, maybe?

Or, wait, do you even ship the Twins? ...Oh dear, what if you don't?

*blink*

Well, IF you do, would you consider a sequel?

...
-twitch-
I do not know what to say.
That was...SO on character that I'm slightly creeped out.

Sigh... that's some brotherly love! Aw I love Kaoru and Hikaru! Great fic!

XD... Guess Tamaki got more than he bargained for. XD. Guess this is how the brotherly love came to be. =) Good job~~`*

ehehehe! tsk. tsk. evil twins! Tamaki is so cute!

hahaha that was cute and funny. i did notice haruhi wasnt there but who cares. the twins r so hot! that was really good

Ah I love this it was super cute and well I liked how you made the twins feel werid things well they were doing the act, as well as making it mainly their idea and not Tamaki's.

Ooh. I likes it a lot.