wel the fact that i found this fic by searching for fics about this pairing kind of spoils the surprise, but still it's a really nice fic and i like it ^_^

You know, I've never ventured into a purely SenshixShitennou fic before. Usually I stick to UsaMamo and just read the SxS side-pairings. xD But since this was you...as always, beautiful piece of work. Your writing is still very poetic and emotional. I'd have to guess Ami/Zoi...or Michiru/any? Or are you sticking to canon? I'm confused. I've also been out of touch with fanfiction, of any fandom, for a long, LONG time...so...forgive me? ^^;

One thing that kind of bothers me is the switch from third person (he and she) to first person (I, my, we) in the second movement. I know it was probably for effect, and the transition made it more personal, but I don't know...it just really stood out. It's nagging at me. xD And that's not a flame, at all, you know I love you and your writing. ^_^

-Kara

Beautifully written! (small typo, I think you meant 'thighs' not 'thigs") At first I thought it was Ami and Zoicite because Ami is like the ice senshi...ice..water...so yeah.. ^_^ and you mentioned the blue in her hair and skin and how she's usually silent... But then you spoke of her braid unraveling and Ami's hair isn't long enough to braid and so... *pouts* I couldn't quite figure out who the pairing was, but it was beautiful in any case.

*nuzzles madly* Fantasmical, my darling. ^^ Ami/Zoisite, ne? I'm afraid I must scarper now, but I adore you madly and I wish to tell you that I'm still reading every bit of your exquisite work...!

...'cept you seem to be fond of sentence fragments. It doesn't matter, tho; it stays consistent with the tone of the piece, so applause be to thee! *dances* Talk to you later, my darling Creampuff! *squeezes*

Daisuki! ^^

- Shi-ko

*huggles*

I think its an Ami fic :D But it could be the outer scout who's name completely escapes me at the moment having a little affair :D

Missed you! Good to see something coming out :D