wow

so sad

but so good

I love it!

Just one thing: if it was me, I would have stopped at Glinda's death, instead of switching perspective and jumping to Elphaba and Fiyero, but that's just me.

Wow, really great. Liked how you spaced out the sentences like that, each one short and hard. Nice job.

Aw so sweet! Poor Glinda I still hate that she never knew Elphie was alive...in the musical anyway...this was sweeta dn poignant and lovely though I hate that Glinda dies I like to dream she lives forever! But great first fic! Love Jess x

Wow - poor Glinda, she's been going through a lot of crap in the stories I've read tonight, and now she's gone and died in this one! lol.

Anyway, this was very good actually. I like how it's written. It's to-the-point, but it hits hard. The short sentences keep the story rolling - so you're just focused on the fact that Glinda's died without being distracted by any pretty, descriptive words. It's just like 'whoop, there it is.' Like it.

Felt quite bad for poor Glinda though - thinking she's going off to see her friends. She'll get to heaven (obviously it's gotta be heaven) see Nessa and be all like 'yo, so...ur, where's everyone else?' and Nessa will be like 'dude, no when else is dead yet.' My god, poor Glin's going to be stuck with religion-preaching Nessa for ages!

Sad. - lol, I know that review was a bit mad but oh well ;) Good bit of story anyway man - I really liked it.