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| LVB 2007-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis is such a sensitive topic but you dealt with it such respect. A wonderful and emotive fanfic. I'm inclined to agree with fanon over this crying scene but you took it and made it believeable. It broke my heart but that's how you know you've got a good story. Well done. |
| niamaea 2007-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have a big BIG problem with the fanon idea that the crying scene in Unending was over a miscarriage -- for every reason that you addressed in your fic. Thank you for making the losing-a-baby make sense, and believable. This is so the only way I can see it having panned out. Thank you :) |
| Whirlwind421 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! It's that scene in the song where Vala was crying and hugging Daniel!! That was so sad!! And this is so sad too!! |
| QuasiOuster 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThat just tied me in knots! What a wonderfully written, interesting perspective. It was really a treat to read (even though it was so heart-wrenching). |
| okelay 2007-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseapparently, that scene in unending gave us all the same idea. i liked how you treat it, not as a miscarriage, but as an abortion. it's a very sensitive subject and you handled it well. |
| Wolfen Moondaughter 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was wonderful -- sad, and very real. I'd been saying pretty much the same thing after that scene, that, as sad as I felt for them if they'd lost a baby, it would be cruel to have a child under those circumstances. (And yet I have a plot-bunny hopping in my head where they do, LOL.) This was very well-handled, and a fresh take. I have a an Undending LJ-community -- I welcome you to join and post this fic there, if you like. http://community. |
| aaobuttons 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was excellent. So powerful. |
| Assilem 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseHi! Omg, this was soo good!! I thought that maybe Vala had a miscariage, I never thought of an abortion! But I applaud you for it! *stands up and claps* |
| StarSplit144 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseReally well written. I saw that scene and kind of assumed something like this happened. ~StarSplit |
| Emily 2007-03-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, wow. Very well done and true to the situation. Nice job. :) |
| Izzles 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseoh. wow. this is so amazingly written - really sad but beautiful. The idea of them having to do that is so crushing, but you managed to write it so it was moving but so we understood. Amazing :) |
| Venus4 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseYour fic is so beautifully written, and fits in really well with the tears scene in the episode, well done x |
| LibKat 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was so sad and so well done. When I saw the episode, my mind went to that they had lost a baby, but having to abort one makes it so much deeper and more tragic. Excellent work. |
| Renenet D. 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI just watched Unending, and had watched that particular scene twice, trying to get what it was about. I suspected something like this. Your story, as well as characters, are spot on. Beautifully written. Thank you. |
| Briar Elwood 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseAH! Reading all these tags is not good for my health...you made me cry. That's a good thing, BTW. Great job, going on faves. |