Darn it! Why did you have to pass away at a time like this? Geez... I was shocked with the news, especially since I was expecting an update in one of your amazing stories. But then...

You will be remembered... Your stories are loved and cherished... Rest in peace...

Love this story, it's really good. Well written, and the emotion in it is really heartfelt (by me, anyway).

Sorry for my terrible English!

Serenanna, thanks for all the beautiful hours that you gave us with your amazing talent.

Hugs for your family from Mexico.

I really like to say more, but I don't really write correctly English, I can just read it. But what did you do with your beautiful histories nobody will forget ever, so you will be always in the hearts from your readers.

RIP, Serenanna.

Amazing.

I hope that wherever you are you can see how much I loved this. :) I only wish I had read your work sooner, but... better late than never?

Eldr

This is so wonderfully written and developped -- I loved the characterizations! ^_^

That was excellent!!

That was beautiful. I love how it was just one little snapshot in their lives but I felt like I got to experience their whole story. An amazingly well-written fic. I think my favorite snippet was this one:

He trailed off, two words out of three left unsaid.

I liked the way you phrased it. It felt almost poetic. Again, this is a beautiful fic and I congratulate you on a job well done!

:] I never really know what to say after I read such stories as these...All I ever know for sure though is THIS STORY IS BOMB :]

I kind of wish it had a back story. Like we could see them get together or a dialogue that might have played out on the field while Sakura's friends were burried? But for being a one-shot, it was done really, really well :] The moment was never rushed.

Bravo c:

Wow another great writer of KakaSaku. I discovered you now! :D This one-shot was great! Very emotional and sad at some parts. I liked the meaning of "coming clean". The smut was great too. One advice though about it and take no offence to that. I'm telling you coz i'm a male.

"Kakashi stopped the movement by grabbing her wrist then slowly raised her hand to his lips. She gave a surprised start at the feeling of her fingers on his mouth, and the slow kissing they received. That start turned into a gasp as he took her forefinger into his mouth, sucking on it."

That was not good. I mean he came moments ago and he put her hand -which most possibly had a bit of his seed- into his mouth. That's gross. While this act is erotic if a woman does it (preferably with her own juices) it's not the same with men. It's very turn off. Anyway aside from that, i thoroughly enjoyed the rest of the smut.

Oh and i believe that when Sakura cries, she is beautiful. I'm reffering to this part of the fic -> "Sakura sniffled loudly and horribly, her puffy, tear-streaked face the opposite of all the beauty she was to him when she looked up. He didn’t care what she looked like as his lips kissed her salt-stained cheeks, tasting the bitterness on her skin."

But i do agree that she is adorable when she is pissed! XD

Through this one-shot i understood that you do have the knack for this pairing. After all you kept them in character and that is an element of an author who knows how to write. Kakashi doesn't admit so easily that he has any sort of feelings (be it acceptance, friendship, lust, love) for someone.

This is my review. And what do i see?? Multi-chaptered KakaSaku named "Dirty Deeds" and another one named "The Way of the Sword" (but i didn't read the fic "Respect and Understanding"... yet). Hehe seems more reading. I'll start with "Dirty deeds". Although i have to study first for university. *sigh* But in my free time i will read a chapter!

That's all from me. Bye for now!

I love your stories! they re so thoroughly written! Are you working on any other ones about Kakashi? and i BEG YOU, please get the next chapter of Dirty Deeds done, i'm dying to read more! XD!!

this was great, I liked it so much in only a little 1 shot and it ended so nicely...most have them having sex once again... but this was a nice ending

This story was just what I needed tonight. Well done.

wow, that was amazing. i had begun to loose hope at finding a good kakashi sakura fic out there these days! it was so real and plausible that i found myself sucked in from the beginning. it was different and yet everything i could ask for in a fiction. characterizations were spot on and you advanced sakura several years in maturaty-as in a real timeline. not this still-stuck-in-the-past-and-sasuke bullcrap.
then the lemon...me likey, hehe. perfect. loved it, mature and completely knowledgable. i was afraid(like manys fics) the story would be great and the lemon scene would be a total bummer, but this wasn't the case. you know what you're doing and i admire that.
your diction and flow was superb, totally going to my favs...and i even think i'm gonna add you as my first faved author! you're totally worthty of it ^_^

This is the best KakaSaku I've ever read

That was so *sob* beautiful! This is such a great story! And I love you for writing it!