 Cassandra30 2009-05-03 . chapter 1I believe he probably did. Quiet courage is why I have always like Neville and love. DumDum never understood that to built a man to die you had to give him a reason to die or to live home, family friends, love; these are the reasons a man fights and keeps on fighting long after he should quit. When he has nothing else to give he finds it anyway because they need him to be there.
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 The Blue Falcon 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Very Good, how old is Neville in this, sixteen? Very Good, please write a sequel or another story like this.
-Pergrine Alexander, author of "The Top 20 Ways to Annoy Scipio". |
 serenity600 2007-05-03 . chapter 1*Sob* So sad!
And nice. |
 Sirius Blaak 2007-04-25 . chapter 1So cute... poor neville... i loved how you portrayted him and his parents, and how even a hug can be awkward if the other person doesn't understand. I absolutely loved the last line. "I did it for you." ah... -shudders- love it... :) |
 SuGaRLiLy 2007-04-15 . chapter 1Wow. This was very touching. The emotion behind the entire piece was so strong. I've always loved Neville and your characterizations of him and of his family were wonderful.
It was also extremely well-written. You have a clean style and employ a very appropriate tone which you are able to sustain throughout the piece.
I have absolutely no constructive criticism to give- I'm speechless. This was lovely. |
 chocoluvr 2007-03-24 . chapter 1What a tear jerker, are any of his friends living on the ward too since the end is after the war? |
 LavvyLav 2007-03-14 . chapter 1Wonderful. Very touching, and very well written. |