Aah, I liked it, but it needs a little...more. More words, more detail, maybe. And clarifying on what Hinata actually did and what happened to her.

I don't... get it... explantion pls.
She died
and fixed a hole inside him?
How would losing someone else fix a hole?
Ah T_T I don't get it
But you're a good writer! ... just a confusing one...


-Yossie-

So Hinata brought Sasuke back, and died while doing it, for Naruto, right? Your story is kind of confusing but good. :)

what?

why did she die? or how?