Reviews for Parley and Betrayal

Reviews For: Parley and Betrayal

arbiter070 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abusenow this was the very first halo story where i first learned about telek.
BloodyPinkRose 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abuseaw poor tulsa. once again i think this is both serious and funny. the more i read the more i like. :), i think i shall go and read the other one now and then the new chapter. great job on this :)
Extra guy without purpose 2007-07-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story was great, like Fleet Master 'Herosee and Mr Hyde. I like the Paris Hilton part, and the mention of the latrine incident from the first story the most. Keep writing, for the sake of your fans!
RaZoRMandiblez 2007-05-11 ch 1,	abuseIm still laughing!that was amazing!great tone,though its a headache to read, especially the longer paragraphs.dosent matter though,there far too few funny fics abt halo arounnd here.dont stop!plenty of potential here. btw, its my frst review, and u definately deserve it.
Spidey3000 2007-04-28 ch 1,	abuseThe covanent is skrewed. There is no way they're gonna have superior technology for long.
PLC 2007-04-14 ch 1,	abuseYeah, uh...I observed that this story had not received a proper amount of reviewing and or worshipping. This awes0m3l33t story needs more glorification and reviews. Thing is, there are more lazy bums than elite reviewers. I'm looking forward to more of these series. In fact, you are, so far, one of the best Covenant-fiction writers here. And I've seen a lot of those other stories enough to say this. There aren't enough Covenant-stuff here. I've read all your HALO fiction, and I'm glad to see that they are all as good as this one. Which is really good.
Nyhtmare 2007-03-27 ch 1,	abuseIt's taken me over five frickin' days but I've finally finished your story. It's worth it. Some parts are rather awkward but I like it. An alcholic Sangheili. Funny! You should hit enter twice when you shift fron the UNSC to Telek because it some times gets confusing. For one chapter this was way too long. I have one question, how many Tulsa's are there? I will keep reading if you keep updating. I love this story. Bye-Bye!
TenWings 2007-03-15 ch 1,	abuseYES I NEED MORE!
Cyndi 2007-03-14 ch 1,	abuseAHAHAHAHAHA! Tootsie pop! Naked singularity! Where do you GET this stuff?! I'm dying here! That whole scene was so freaking funny. I demand more funny Telek fics!
Electromotive Force 2007-03-14 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is as good as it is odd. Very odd at that. I really am enjoying it so far and it's very original. It was very funny at times too, though I think Paris Hilton is hot. Heheh. Anyways, this is a nice departure from the storyline. I like it a lot and I hope you continue. Just a suggestion: You use something eye-catching to signify a change in point of view or character, like a line or *. There is a line symbol in word processor suite.

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