Xenolord 2007-06-25 ch 3,  | abuseThis is a very good story you've got. However, it's got one problem. It's not done! Hurry up and finish, please! |
RPGMAN1 2007-04-02 ch 3,  | abuseYou're doing good!
Keep it up! |
PhantomOfThePunjab 2007-03-15 ch 3,  | abuseVery violent...but strangely good! UPDATE!
PhantomOfThePunjab |