amazing, simply amazing. I love Knives' attiude on the whole thing.

You ended that chapter brilliantly! :D

Haha, that was great, I loved the flashback.

Wow, I love you'r writing style, good job. ^^

Love it.

*sigh* I'm very happy, today!

I'm so happy I came across this story!! I'm so happy I came across your penname!! I love your work now!

You know, I would figure it would be hard to keep their characters as they were in the anime, but you did it like it was no problem at all.

Knives seemed like his usual genocidal self, a little more human(or..less murderous...) but Vash, Meryl, and Millie was there to fix that so its understandable!

I really adore them now. Knives Millions and Meryl Stryfe...so cute! Kawaii! *does fangirl scream*

Great story, the final chapter made it all the better. Even though the fourth chapter was a great ending, the last chapter was just as good ^^

omg so CUTE! i love it i love it i love it!

Aw, what a sweet ending. I liked it. On the other hand, how dare Knives give Meryl a cane as an anniversary gift! Whether it was a joke or not, it was very insensitive. Meryl should have shoved that cane up Knives' you know where.

Aww...cheesy, but cute! =) Hope to expect lots more updates of your other stories from you!

Aw...Knives' fierce macho cluelessness is so cute it makes me want to giggle insanely. XD

Once again though, I thought the pacing was a bit rushed. o_o I would've expected more of an emotional reaction from Meryl (or anyone for that matter) after their mind has been forcefully dug into.

Otherwise great chapter, and the only other thing I have to say is--WHERE IS THE CUTE KISS OF GIGGLEDOM?! RAWR.

-continues reading-

Whoa, the UST in that last part was amazing. The next chapter better have some sort of consummation thing happening, or I swear I will lob tomatoes at Knives' denial.

Favourite Line:
“Yay!” Millie cried. “You guys get to have a sleep over!”

Yay for Millie's cuteness and your awesome writing skillz. >=D

Great chapter again, but Knives was a bit softer than I expected. (I would've expected yelling at the least, somewhere.) The Vash input was cute though.

'“Dear brother” sputtered and leaned back in his chair. He’d been found out! Diversion, he needed a diversion!

“Of course not! I just wanted to help you!”'

XDD! That line just made me laugh, since I always do that with my friends. =D

-continues reading-

Aw...cute/dorky/sexy/confused Knives! Yummy! =)

A great beginning, and I loved everything about the chapter, except for the pacing--I personally like romantic stuff to be drawn out more, but, I'll make an exception with your otherwise brilliantly written case. =D

-continues reading-

That was a good ending to a great story!

aw
i loved the ending.
i was getting all sad at first when i read that she had a cane. i thought that meant she was old. :*( knives and vash coulnd't possibly go without their loving wives! hahaha
this is my favorite pairing and i absolutely enjoyed this fic