 LFO 2007-07-01 . chapter 10Sheesh, it's really unlike me to shirk off my reading duties for this long. I'm sorry, it's just that I really wanted to Veg for a while, and I did, so...here I am!
A nice chapter, but it looks over-edited, to me. There were a good amount of grammar mistakes, and no offense, but it looks a bit slopy. Could I read the un-edited version? Aside from the part where the chapter might not be that sloppy, I really want to read that juicy lemon you wrote. They're good, anyways, and to hear from you that you got carried away...drools...
Oh yes, and about my trip. It was very nice, being in another country and all, seeing the sites, etc, but it got very monotonous very fast. I got through it cause I had my step-siblings (8, 16, 16), and one of the older two's friends. The thing is, my step-dad, who was there before, likes people more than landscape, and that's the exacte opposite for me. I like landscape more, and it was very boring sitting around (or walking) all day, looking at the people. Of course, we traveled around the whole country, but how long can you last on a friggin thre week vacation? Long story short, I'm REALLY glad that I'm back. |
 Sora Keyblader 2007-06-24 . chapter 10you know what?
I absolutely, LOVE, no wait.. SUPPER/LOVE/A D O R E ! ! !
how you did this fic! XD
I simply LOVE, how you made it so that everyone was still in the organization. And Roxas, and Namine, and the whole deal is just great! and how theyc an feel and all! |