Aw! It's so sweet! Did you see tonights episode? I won't ruin anything if you didn't, but it made me happy!!

Hiro is my favorite in the series with Ando a close second. you caught their friendship perfectly. I enjoyed this story alot.

An absolutely beautiful, WONDERFUL story! It was extremely well written, and portrayed Hiro and his thoughts perfectly. The Ando-Hirodynamic has always interested me, and Ando definately is just as much a hero a any other on the show. In fact, the only person I enjoy seeing Hiro interact with more than Ando is Nathan, only because those two are hilarious together.

So this is what you were up all night for.

Nice story, though. I like how well you portray Hiro's physical frustration (with not being able to drive, not being able to teleport) alongside his emotional frustration without giving one more emphasis than the other.

The ending is well-done, too. Not sappy, not cheesy, just matter-of-fact, almost.

Good job on a cool story.