This is so amazing and heart breaking at once. Great job, seriously. I loved reading it, even though it made me a little bit sad! :)

Hey Bea. This is Trixy. I'm dropping by to inform you that I'm using this account from now on. :D

This story has been FAVED.

Bea!

I know I'm so late but I haven't visited in ages!

This story broke my heart to pieces. I can say that you've gotten better in writing.

Good job.

*sniff*

Great story, I love it...

This is great. I

In a crooked little town, they were lost and never found, fallen leaves, fallen leaves, fallen leaves on the-

Uh, sorry. Just had to get that out of my system ;

. . Seriously. Like, stare at the screen, mouth wide open, eyes tearing up sad.

Amazing.

BEE. xD

This is so totally freaking awesome! I miss our Angelina-Fred, Alicia-George and Katie-Oliver days! And now were backtracking! This is so COOL. ]

This chapter almost made me cry. :[ She seems so sad. WRITE MORE. And you know I think you're a brilliant writer. ]

I loved this. Fantastic emotion used here. You really had me feeing so sorry for Alicia. You should definitely add more to this in the future. Thanks for the little acknowledgment in the beginning. Much appreciated :)

Fabulous job

Eruaphadriel

Nice story, well written, expressive, damn your good.

Poor Alicia. Great writing.

Oh my goodness. That was beautiful. Every sentance was perfect. I got tirey eyed on about the forth sentance. Haha. The use of metaphores and allusions was very effective. Lovely job! :)