|Reviews for The Ill Effect|
| Abbstarz 1/24/11 . chapter 1
My Family is my favourite comedy show of all time. It's brilliantly written and all the characters are extremely enteraining in their own way and you've captured them marvelously.
A fantastic one shot that's done justice to this great show.
Kudos to you. 3
| sova enari 9/23/09 . chapter 1
My Family is the best :D
| WritingJunkie 4/14/08 . chapter 1
Would have maybe been better if it had been a little longer but it's still good ]
| AngelEyes87 4/3/08 . chapter 1
I think you could have added a lot more detail in this and yeah, it was funny xD And another thing, you should be careful of spelling errors as I spotted a few. Also, try to establish the plot too.
| Aggie Escott 1/21/08 . chapter 1
Nice start (it is just start, isn't it?)
do keep going, i need to know what the job is!
| jackiez32 12/27/07 . chapter 1
This is good so keep going!
| MissHaunted-MoonLight 5/21/07 . chapter 1
Cute start! Definately seems like the Harpers to me! _
Just one thing, you should probably watch out for your tenses - with this, you've started in the past tense then moved into the present. It's only a minor thing, but keeping everything in the same tense helps the story to flow better as a whole.
Still, I love the characterisation you've created - they all seem to be exactly as they're portrayed in the show, so brilliant work with that!
Gonna update? You probably should! I'd read on! :)
Peanut x X x
| XxBeautyFairytaleOfJorrieXx 4/23/07 . chapter 1
AW good start I liked it, I love my family