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| Kitarra 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseZay-el, what can I say? This is a fantastic start. It's like you've taken the central point of my story...which I haven't even clearly articulated here yet...and distilled it to a single page. I would love to see more, and I'm going to smack you the next time that you say you're intimidated by anyone else's story. You can hold your own, buster! :-) |
| Luv2Game 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseAh, a new BGE fic. ^.^ And it looks very interesting. I do hope you continue! Really liked the approach you took on the prologue. Hope to see this evolve into more. ^.^ |
| Glen-Hikari 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abusewow, I like it keep going |
| Mei1105 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting beginning. Its reflective with regards to what happens in the game. Interesting theory with Jade as the balance of good and evil. I quite like it. Please continue with this. (Sorry I'm normally a lot more enthusiastic about new stories but I'm really running on empty today) :) |