I love this lil piece of fiction! Kill Anakin! Oh I have plans for my evil Obi-Wan in my story )

It was very good, I was wrapped up in the story immediately, great first effort!

A great story. Very good.

powerful, good job, ;d I don't know what else to say. GOOD JOB!

Good story. I liked it as well as the video that gave you the inspiration to write this story. I wish you would have put more though. Like Obi-Wan taking care of Anakin, but oh well, it's good all the same.

Tiffany

Applause!

Came to this fic through a vid on youtube (the one by Lonestardrifters). I doubt this is how George would've written Obi-Wan's reaction (although it is definitely what the fans would've LOVED to have seen) George probably would've have had Obi-Wan tell Padme - "Anakin will stop hurting you in time." Or something stupid like that. It was refreshing to read this fic and watch a vid in which Obi-Wan takes the initiative to defend Padme and kick Anakin's a** for the right reasons. : )

"Obi-wan smiled and nodded. He gently took her hand and guided her to his room. As he got into bed she got in on the other side, Obi-wan wanted so much to wrap his arms around her but he didn’t want to push his luck so instead they both feel asleep with their backs facing each other."

Aww. That's a good way to put it. Obi is just not a pushy guy and she is not feeling very trusting towards any man, anywhere right now and he understands that.

Nothing will ever come between them again...YAY.. Obidala.

I hope to see more Obidalas from you.

You should check out Ticklesivory profile on She moderates an Obidala forum, plus more. :)

I commented on the vid, with another name. But, forgot to rate. So will go back. I thought it was a great vid and said so too.

WONDERFUL story! I love it. I started to tear up and everything. I hope to see more Obidala stuff coming from your way. Keep it up and Mtfbwy!