Wow! I love this story! Rasengan hmmm. Are you by any chance a Naruto fan?

Great story! It was recommended on one of my borgin_and_burkes yahoo group. Thanks so much for writing, I definitely put this story on alert.

Thanks, Wendy

I read your story many times and I was wondering if you are planning on updating it. I would love to read more of it so PLEASE update it. I beg you. It is one of my most favorite stories that I have ever read. If you aren't planning on continuing it than at least post a message to tell us.

Thank you.

That's where you stopped? I really hope that this is just an extended hiatus. If not, you have a truly wonderful story and I hope to see more of it, if it is in your plans.

I'm not sure if all of this Japanese stuff is really my thing, but, I must admit, it is a well thought out original, well written idea!

this is a good story and i have enjyed reading it so far

great story wish there was more well done

I have got to say, I was uncertain about this at first but so far I have enjoyed this story a great deal.

This story is well written, but to spend so much time and energy in Harry building up his mind scape I consider a huge and boring mistake. He learns occupancy, should have only taken a small paragraph. Without action the story is completely boring.

Very interesting, compelling story, with vivid and memorable OCs. Also portrays the other characters well, I think you really catch their personalities instead of shoving everyone into a plot blender and letting them say whatever advances the story regardless of whether or not it makes sense.

Your story takes the stereotyped Far East Story and turns it around into something good, without making Potter OP. Overpowered, that is. Interesting views on magic you have, not sure if this is RL folklore as I don't live in Japan.

For some reason this story reminds me a little of Bleach. Ichigo and Harry are both insanely powerful, but unprepared.

Snape had it coming hard. Then again, ending Snape is pretty much mandatory in HP fan fiction.

Hope to see you write more on this.

Chaos.

AWESOME THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOL OF AN IDEA! i cant wait for more!

So how many people have been getting your anime/manga referrences. I can remember three off the top of my head.

1.Urahara's speech.

2.Kido.

3.Rasengan.

How many am I missing?

Hmm...seems as if finally Albus too-many-names Dumbledore has

realised that he isn't the one that holds any kinda control over young Harry...especially now that he's also lost his spy Severus Snape! Just what will happen to Severus, seeing as what Harry did within his mindscape the last resort counter-attack resulted in Severus's mind being...broken/crusher? But

Severus's body is still function isn't it, so can/or will his mind be able to reform itself on its own or will it need outside assistance...if outside help is needed will it be given?

Since Harry, has been training so effectivey with his Sensai Ken and Maya...how long will it be before his Sensai is forced

to return to her duty in Japan and what will happen then? As Harry has been actively learning eastern magic and passing on someone of these teachings to the rest of the DA (all those able to occulmency)...will the DA consider about "placing" actual defense about the physical Hogwarts castle outside and inside the wards against any intruder who "intends" harm to those within Hogwarts? Such as using certain plans as part of the defences (eg mandrakes, devil's snare, etc)...Neville would

be the natural person to decide upon the most useful plants and undoubtably Ron with his chess stragies mind (with the aid of Harry's Sensai and Maya) to find the weaknesses of the castle and the grounds against intruders (wizards/witches, animaguses, or any magical being who intends harm to those kept safe by the wards of Hogwarts)...I'm certain the whole of the DA could help in setting those up?

I think that Luna is a brilliant girlfriend for Harry, as they fit so well together...and have many of the social/emotional insecurity issues! I can hardly wait to see just what Hermione

and her new friend rune apprentice (darn can't remember the character's name) will do with the MC next...and just how useful the device might be in the defense of Hogwarts, the grounds or Hogsmeade against intruders such as death eaters, MoldyShorts or any of his other nasty allies he just might have acquired!

LOVE IT! can't wait for an update! hope you haven't abandoned it!

Also do you know any other good Harry/Luna stories?

update soon