Ummmmm... It was short, and weird, and very rushed...

Creepy, but funny. I kinda laugh pretty hard at the end.

Dude! Use apostrophes correctly, or don't use them at all, you're just raping them. You already have a bunch of sex partners, stop raping the apostrophes. You also raped the caps lock (whore). You have a few spelling mistakes too, and you just suck overall.

I like how you wrote the story well and how the plot does make sense. But I don't think you have a right to call people that don't have good grammer idiots, morons, or stupid. Not everyone is good at grammer like you are. Nobody's perfect. I've even caught one or two mistakes in some of your stories.

ManaManaphy

Really? I loved this slightly (not your best work but still liked it) but you're actually right. Grammar, punctuation and an actual- but somewhat stupid- plot :) Also, this so-called "sigh" please refrain from reviewing anonymously because I'm pretty sure you ARE a wimp with doing that. Too afraid to fight with Farla, ne?

Seriously Farla, this is bad. Then again, this was written nearly nine years ago and you have definitely improved as a writer since then. I'm actually surprised that this site has been AROUND for that long, but whatever...

sorry, but after reading your criticism on other peples fics, you write like crap. your probably going to say that its due to the plot of the story. but no you simply lack creativity that you fail to see in others. get a life and work on your own writing before u go onto other peoples fics and say the same thing you always do.

stupid

It was funny.

I know you like Pokemon! It was also funny when Ash made his friends faint.

Sad but funny.

I'll say it was well written, but that's it! I honestly can't believe you posted this! Really bad!

Now, I know you said you loved Pokemon, but what the fuck? and another thing, you don't need to interupt the story saying what you considered doing because honestly, no one cares!

Even if there are anti-Pokemon fics out there, this is terrible! I really don't know what the hell you were thinking when you wrote this!

Obviously this was written some time ago, but I found it while looking for a decently written fic with good spelling, grammar, a decent plot and characters that were actually in character.

WHAT A LET DOWN!

What happened to Pikachu? Poké Balls melt. They're synthetic plastic.

...okay. That was...kinda disturbing. And Poké Balls melt, not burn;they're made of synthetic materials.

I think it's a mistake on your part because you DO use "like" properly throughout the rest of the fic.

Well, yeah it's short, it's horrible, it makes practically no sense and yet...

Well hopefully in Ash's crazed state he might've mistaken a flight of stairs as a series os small cliffs...

I can imagine the whole scene pretty well though... but to think of his friends going "Oh Ash are you okay?" only to have rocks smashed into their heads is slightly sickening to me.

Overall, interesting story (Haven't read any of these strange-genre stories before) and hey, it scares me. So success.

I've never read an anti-Pokemon story, but, yeah. It's not anti-Pokemon if you give it a reason.

I think anti-Pokemon fics should at least be funny.

Heh, I've seen plenty of real anti fics: Pokémon, Inu-Yasha, Digimon, you name it, it's out there. But this fic was actually written pretty well under the circumstances. And what do I say to people who write real anti-Pokémon fics? Please, get a life and/or writing skills. Thank you and have a nice day