It's refreshing to see the Kaz portrayed in a positive light. Usually people bash on him. But this shows that maybe he wasn't all bad, that he had a good reason for being mean to Gaara. Thanks so much for it :D

I liked it, keep writting. The kazakage ( i don't tjink i spelled that right) must hate his son and then leave his son alone for years, but then suddenly has a dream about his wife and she hates him for leaveing their son. SO he's really sorry and realises he loves his son gaara so he soes to him, but know gaara hates him, and he feels really guilty. Am i right or what. I don't care if thats how the story is going or not write - write fast...? Ok sorry i kinda lost myself heh sweat drop...

honestly? that was a great story. I almost cried tears. T_T

I wish I could write like you..

That was pretty good! It was very sad. Made me sad. Sigh...

Heh, sorry, it wasn't that awesome.

Factually, it's rather off.

1. Karura did not agree. She was coerced. She cursed the village to her death.

2. Chiyo helped seal the Shukaku into Gaara to perhaps use that as a weapon. Both the Kazekage and Karura knew this, and Karura knew she would die.

3. '"You took her life," I said bitterly, "And for that I shall never, never forgive you. Demon child!"'

a. He was one who created the demon child, baka. (To Gaara's dad, not to you.)
b. It seems very unnatural and OOC.

4. The eye and mouth thing, Gaara talking, seemed very nice. Good work. Maybe instead of 'His eyes seemed to tell me this', you could have written 'He seemed to say with his mouth open..."

5. Good job with the funeral.

This was great. i loved this. ^^