 intelligenceisstupid 2009-07-31 . chapter 2Oh dear. The next chapter doesn't look like a pg rating... But you know I'm gonna read it anyway. |
 intelligenceisstupid 2009-07-31 . chapter 1If I don't review, what will happen...?
Just kidding. But you know, It shouldn't be that easy to kill Krad.But I like that Dark has just enough energy to make a move on Satoshi. |
 Violet Garnets 2009-07-20 . chapter 6"Hell hath no fury like a Hikari scorned."
Effing genius line. I always have wonderful things to say to you, because you always have impeccable writing. This was adorable, from beginning to end. The end was particularly hilarious. My only suggestion would be that it was all a little rushed, but that's totally understandable, considering the quick feeling of Riot (runs to listen to song). Anyway, I did PM you, love your work as always, hope you're doing well!
Ja ne,
Vi |
 Uniasus 2008-04-22 . chapter 5So...*nudge nudge* what about the rest of the chapters to this fic? |
 Aya-Chan4861 2007-10-29 . chapter 5Your Brilliant! I love it! This fanfic is soo awesome >.< I seriously hope that their will be another chapter update real soon. I was speechless the whole time I was reading it and I was stunned to see how much I could relate to what the DNAngel charaters were feeling. Just reading this fanfic makes me want to become an even better writer. Please update soon and I hope that this isn't the last fanfic that I'll ever read from you. Bless you and you god like soul. |
 Animelover621 2007-10-27 . chapter 5wow!!
i love it!!^^
nice job!!
plz continue!! |
 KousukeAsazuki 2007-10-22 . chapter 5Yaay *kicks your ass some more* Uh... not like that x-x. XD, I found this chapter nothing but amusing. Damn, see, I just can't do that. I make everything angsty, I can't do funny. *hugs Argentine* Which is why I have him, his idioticness makes things funny and saves me from being a purely angsty writer. Ah, but you have covered much more than just one corner of the genre world, and... I have no idea what I'm saying, but what I mean to say is...
You pwn me like no one's business. XD, lovely chapter, though, and it's good to see you updating! Perhaps I'll try it again sometime soon. |
 Majestically Mystical 2007-10-21 . chapter 5Ah, I love this so much!
So angsty and ek.
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 Niie-Niie 2007-10-21 . chapter 5Horay!*par-ty-ing* ^^
You finally updated after a long moment of period!I'm so happy to meet the next chapter!-hugging you tight-
Krad is definitely NOT AN OOC here!>_< I love the way you describe Krad's behaviour and Satoshi!No kick Dark's ass!Oops~!Kick his ass for unfaithful to you!What's the meaning of boyfriend anyway if Dark's craving for someone else!?This is so angsty!^^ If Daisuke push Dark away,it won't be matter anymore cause it's better if Satoshi hate him that time!Let him eat the fist!MUAHAHAHAHA!-evil laugh-
Okay,I will wait for the next update so please please PLEASE update faster!^^
Finally,great job,fellow!^_~ |
 iKat.13 2007-10-20 . chapter 5Today's been a good week. People from a trillion years ago have been updating old stories. Like you.
I liked how you only bolded the 'he' in 'She'...and you don't suck, you rock...even though you do kind of suck for not updating in forever. |
 Mystery Reader 2007-10-16 . chapter 4 Update Update Update. Please, this story is getting good. I also like your other stories. But I really hate cliffies in a good story. |
 KousukeAsazuki 2007-08-24 . chapter 4Holy hell, valedictorian? So you're a pwning writer -and- a good student? I am no longer worthy to even review...but I will.
I found the last bit kind of.. funny. Like, I laughed, funny. Dark skipping and saying that... he kind of reminded me of Demyx a little there. But it did lighten up the very depressing/angry mood of the past...*coughsthreechapterscough* Uh... XD, but I love depressing and angry/angsty/whatever you want to call it. But knowing you... Dark will get there too late even though he left literally thirty seconds after Daisuke. Or, maybe he'll happen upon them in the act and Krad will run away with Daisuke and leave Dark like -he- left -Daisuke-!
Oh, there goes my imagination... bye, imagination! Come back sometime soon, I need you for writing!
See, now... I read it, and now I have to wait... don't make me wait too long, I might sink into depression or something worse... like normality. |
 KousukeAsazuki 2007-08-24 . chapter 3Ooh, twisty and turny and much fun, indeed. So much betrayal, I love it. Poor tormented Dark, poor confused Daisuke... poor used Satoshi, and...yeah, there's nothing really poor about Krad. He's just messed up in the head, which is by no means a reason to call him poor. After all, who -isn't- messed up in the head?
Certainly not you, for writing this wonderful work, and certainly not me for loving it. I can't wait to read the next one, oh... but it's the last one until you update. Should I wait? Or should I indulge myself? Gah! I don't know what to do... screw it, I'm reading it! |
 KousukeAsazuki 2007-08-24 . chapter 2Ah! All my sadistic fantasies have been fulfilled. So I guess I could go with the fluffy answer to the previous chapter... XD
Poor Daisuke, so messed up in the head. And who can refuse a sadistic, sexy, manipulative Krad? The poor boy just had no chance at all. But it's a good thing, it means kinkiness for us. And so, I am off to read the next chapter! This is going to suck when I have to wait for you to update XDD. |
 KousukeAsazuki 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Well, if I must review, then review I shall. *didn't even notice that this fic was in existence* Yes, I know... I'm unobservant and lazy. Which is the exact reason I've updated nothing in forever. |
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