Reviews for Warriors of Light and Dark

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Lunar Kweh 2008-06-27 ch 3,	abuseWell, you've got me pretty interested. I like how you handle your characters--they seem spot-on, especially Lucian. I particularly like how you wrote this chapter, too--the guardian was a nice touch, and you took the setting into consideration when you wrote. Not many FFN writers would take heat exhaustion into consideration when writing about a lava chamber! ...Or is it magma? o.o Anyway. The only real problem I have with this is that is the occasional grammatical mistake. Nothing major--just comma placement, mostly. I'd suggest maybe getting a beta--you've got a good piece of writing, and this is the only thing I can find wrong with it. Well, at any rate, keep up the good work, kupo! =D ~LK
Raven the Joker 2008-03-04 ch 3,	abuseKya! It took you forever to update!! DX ::Growls:: Well, I shouldn't talk kuz I haven't updated anythign in a while, also... ::Smiles sheepishly:: Anyway, I think this chapter is GREAT. So.. so interesting. XD And it would be great if there were really a chimera guarding that chest. I just love lvling, see? Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! Just take your time! Jaa!
Mooncry 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseHmm...Forgot to review chapter one...By the way, in the game you DO run into the Fencers on the opposite side of the Hot Dogs. Where the those slime balls are. Haha. Lucian makes fun of Broker's ears...
anonymous 2008-01-20 ch 3, anon.	abuseYES! You're back to updating this story! I thought this chapter was awesome. May I make one request? When Lucian and Aaron try to find the Scythe of Hel, can you make another guardian for it? This time however, the guardian is a ghost of a character from the Boktai games. That,ll be sweet.
Mooncry 2008-01-17 ch 3,	abuseYay! You updated! Noce touch with the guardian. Going to do the same for the sycth?
lady-of-destruction-aria 2008-01-17 ch 3,	abuseYay, an update! I really love the description you put into these. And your battle scenes are amazing. I wish I could write battle scenes like that! ^^ Hope that was somewhat motivational..Hope to see more soon! =D
Pen and Paper71 2008-01-16 ch 3,	abuseVery nice work! The wait was more than worth it.
Mooncry 2008-01-02 ch 2,	abuselol From preferance to fruits than potions to trapped doors, this story is like a master piece of ironies. This is probably one of the few LK stories I read so far that doesn't have any yaoi. ((So please keep that up.)) By the way, keep the story up now that I have decided to keep an alert on this.
Transimage 2007-08-18 ch 1,	abuseAfter the first three paragraphs, my face was like: 8D This is really a well-rounded story. It shows the interaction between Lucian and Aaron really well... personally I loved Aaron's preference of fruit. It was interesting. :D I hope to see the third chapter soon!
Raven the Joker 2007-06-30 ch 2,	abuseExcellent writing style, I can even imagine some scene in my head clearly as a picture. I'm looking forward to next chapter! xD
Fairy Red 2007-06-22 ch 2,	abuseOoh...ah...wow. That is quite a lot! ^^ You write great so far! Is this gonna turn into Lucian/Aaron...? XD Jut curious. I love that pairing! What a great story thus... I hope to see more! ^^ PS: go check out my Lunar Knights fanfic? I just post it today! ^^ Thanks! bye!
Fairy Red 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abuseThis looks good so far! ^^ i'll go read that next chappie!
lady-of-destruction-aria 2007-06-19 ch 2,	abuseI found this story a while ago and was anxiously waiting for an update. It was just as good as I was expecting it to be. ^^ Great job! I'll be watching this one from now on.
Pen and Paper71 2007-06-19 ch 2,	abuseAn excellent addition. Your character portrayals and writing style are very interesting which makes the story more enjoyable. I hope more will be coming shortly.
Pen and Paper71 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abuseExcellent so far. Please update soon!

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