Weird.

I don't see Neji reacting that way to his child, or doing his own cousin.

But still good.

Okay, good idea...'cuase i'm a sucker for those sick-twisted dramatic-angsty fanfics (you can tell by a few of mine)

However i do feel that it isn't "scary" enough to be classified as a horror, and do know that horror doesn't mean scary, but more like bone chiling.

Even though Hinata/Neji isn't one of my fav couples(they're cousins)it was well written. Good job!

Barbossa:)

Very sad and depressing but Oh you've so gotta love the sad and depressing, good job.

Wow, very violent!

Hi, anyways, sam, now I am clear, so I'm back! Well, I don't know what to think really. It's pretty short, about five to six pages is a good length. I think the thing should be in drama and tragedy! At the beginning there should be a a/n indicator, and I caught some spelling mistakes. Overall it's good, and you should keep at it!


Oh, my, gosh, in a dream? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, that's so funny! The funniest I heard in a century! You could win the most funniest idea award!

Hi Sam! I was bored so decided if you had any more stories. I don't get Naruto, but I liked it. I was really surprised to read that she still loves her father.

BTW, there were a few spelling errors (you might want to fix that) and perhaps Tradegy would be a better catergory for it than Horror.

Hm...not scary enough to be classified as horror, but oh well, it's your choice ^^ You might want to lengthen it a bit though, it's a little short.

All in all, it's okay ^^