 Oggers231 2008-10-16 . chapter 8 Is the death race going to be in this? I never saw the episodes "Road Rage" and I'd like to know what happens in it. Do Paradigm and Meathook get killed in the death race? And if so, how? Thanx in advance |
 ahilty 2008-08-28 . chapter 1Interesting. To be honest it has been years since I thought of Street Sharks, but this makes it kinda new for me.
One question, are ya'll going to use the original orgin story for Dino Vengers, or are you going to use the Extreme Dinosaurs one? Just curious. |
 Anon_Firefly 2008-08-09 . chapter 5 Lemme guess... Alice and Wonderland? |
 Anon_Firefly 2008-08-09 . chapter 2 XD LIKE IT!?! LIKE IT!?! I LOVE IT! It's so gripping!! The action, the drama, the amnesia!! And fish!! Yum! It's amazing! *calms down*
Okay, okay, I see that going from the present (after the shark change) to the past (before shark change) is going to be a recurring theme for you. I think it would be a little bit easier to understand the story if they story was written in chronological order. But, hey, it's your story and your writing style.
Alright,*goes crazy again* ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER! WOOT!! |
 Anon_Firefly 2008-08-09 . chapter 1 Well done. Very well done. I was watching the series earlier and was thinking that someone should do a retake, redesign of the show and your story is very well written and sensible. My thanks to your co-author as well.
I would like to make a suggestion however. Were you purposefully trying to make it look like it was Doctor Bolton who modified his sons or are you going to explain it in the rest of the chapters? I'd better finish the chapters first before I add anymore to this review, huh? Thanks for the redo of the series! |
 Lady Threarah 2008-06-20 . chapter 9Yes! Fantastic work! You know, when the series was on television, I had only caught the tail end of this episode (no pun intended). Now, thanks to you, I know how he got started.
I also love coming back to your fic and rereading it (sorry for messing up your hit counter!) because it's just such a treat to read a fic that's not only written well, but for one of my all time favorite universes. Please don't give up on it! And my inbox is open if you feel like small talk/idle chatter. Sometimes it helps me straighten out the plots in my head ;) |
 Widjet 2008-05-22 . chapter 9 aw man, this is awsome
i just read through the whole thing and i really love your take on the whole story
please PLEASE continue! |
 Shibusawa 2008-05-07 . chapter 9 This story is really looking good Keep it up. |
 Nightshade 2008-04-26 . chapter 9 Plz continue the redux it's so cool XD |
 Pokemistress 2008-03-11 . chapter 1 Yay! Love it! |
 Reis Dragoner 2007-12-14 . chapter 1 YA! New chapter! WO! Please keep writing! |
 Pokemistress 2007-12-02 . chapter 8 Very good! Glad it came so soon. I'm just hoping Melvin comes in soon. |
 Pokemistress 2007-11-09 . chapter 7 About time! Get more done! I love it. XD |
 44-Dragon-Mistress-44 2007-10-17 . chapter 1^0^ AMAZING FANTASTIC BREATH-TAKING STUNNING! Very very good job so far ;D Keep it up ;D |
 Rebecca G. 2007-10-08 . chapter 1 Great! I love the extra details you've added and I love the way you emphasise the sibling dynamic between the brothers. I like the way John especially takes on an almost parental roll in looking out for his brothers especially Cooper. I've read Chapter 2 and some of Chapter 3 and I was wondering if you were going to mention more about their mother. The only thing that's mentioned in the original series is when Dr Paradigm has stolen Dr Bolton's watch and tries to pass that their father gave it to him. To which they say "No way, Mom gave it to him. What are you doing with it? He'd never give it away" Indicating that she must have passed away. I always wished they'd have brought up more about what happened to her and perhaps discuss how it affected all of them. One thing that does bother me. I realize that those of us who were fans of the show are older now but I wish you'd still leave the bad language out. I appreciate that you've kept it to a minimum but I don't think the story line would lack anything if you left it out completely. Thank you. Rebecca. |