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| Kimmers 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abuseLoved so much great job with it, |
| Murgy31 2007-10-15 ch 10, | abuseAWESOME, AWESOME STORY! |
| EarlGrayTea 2007-10-14 ch 10, | abuseYou may just be taking the charichters out to play, but your certainly doing a lot more than that. This story rang true in every sense, it was sad, happy, triviel, and increadbly genuine. |
| Countrygirl09 2007-09-15 ch 10, | abusethis is the first Dawson's Creek fanfic that I've ever read and actually understood... before now I had only seen parts of the first season but now I've seen almost every epsoide and I can say that this is an amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait to sit down and read the sequel. |
| Broedy 2007-05-06 ch 9, | abuseWonderful story - great characterisations and snappy dialogue that is very true to the show. I hope this is just the start of many DC stories you write - you certainly have a knack for it! |
| rose 2007-04-07 ch 9, anon. | abuseI liked that. Thank you. |
| Gufa 2007-03-30 ch 9, anon. | abuseI'm sorry I wasn't able to review this chapter by chapter, but I only stumbled upon this story a couple of days ago, just in time to read the first six chapters and then the last three... But, anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed the story very much. Aside from the fact that it's very weòò-written on its own, I like what you've done with the characters and how you have them act and especially interact. It's very realistic and in-character with how I imagine they were and they became, if that makes sense. Maybe because I was always a PJ fan, but I find it all fitting. I like Joey and Pacey's life, I like seeing Jack and Andie, I like the way Dawson finally admits what he should have known all along. ALl the back-and-forths and emotional swings that you describe are very fitting. I did think at the beginning that having all of them gathered around a hospital bed etc would be an "easy" plot device, but instead you worked it into the story perfectly. In short, I loved the "flavor" of this story; thanks for sharing it, and I would love to see more of your writing! Cheers, Gufa |
| shiney1983 2007-03-29 ch 9, | abuseI love this chapter! It's so sweet and sentimental, but not at all sappy. I also enjoyed the reference to Gilmore Girls, another favorite show of mine. It ended rather appropriately as well, with the two of them reading their book. I thought Joey's 'home' speech to Pacey held in it echoes of her 'make love to me' speech on the ski trip. I do think however that you could have added in some interaction between Joey and Bessie, I always did love their relationship. Other than that I think this is a rwally complete fic, almost to the point of being circular. I think it maybe one of the most well written DC fics I've ever read. Excellent job!! |
| PaceyW'sgirl 2007-03-29 ch 9, | abusethat was a good ending, liked this story. |
| LiZ457 2007-03-28 ch 9, | abuseloved it :D i would love for u to write even more on this one or maybe so sort of sequel or just another pacey and joey fic. |
| shiney1983 2007-03-28 ch 8, | abuseI like that resolution, I think it's a lot more resolute than the end of the show. I must admit that while I will always be a Pacey/Andie & Dawson/Joey girl in my heart, in my head the Pacey/Joey ending does have a more grown up feel to it. I also think it's good that you made Pacey and Dawson resolve things, I always thought the show should've and could've handled that so much better. Can't wait to see how you are going to wrap things up so update soon please. |
| PaceyW'sgirl 2007-03-28 ch 8, | abuselove to read more of Pacey and Joey, and he recovery at home, they are my favourite couple they deserve to be together, i hate dawsons but i am sorry if that affends anyone just dont like him. |
| smokeydog 2007-03-27 ch 8, anon. | abuseI really liked the story, though I always figured that Joey picked Pacey because a relationship with Dawson was just too intense and consuming. You know, I really liked Gretchen. I felt she was far more the type of woman Dawson could havea long term relationship with -- both Dawson and Joey are rather high maintanence. |
| LiZ457 2007-03-27 ch 8, | abuseplease update asap!! :) |
| myla84 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThanks for the beautiful Pacey/Andie sweet scene. I love your story. |