Amazing story telling. I was looking for a good story to read after reading Vathara's Embers, and I'm glad that I have found yours. I'm surprised that it doesn't have more reviews. The best compliment I can come up with is you've written a really great story. Keep doing what you're doing :)

Woow, this is a great story! I really love how you made Zuko a round character, that he's actually evolving. Your writing is entertaining, pleasant and flawless, and your ideas are just wonderful. I have no idea if you plan on some romance, but personally, I'm fond of your ZukoToph-scenes.

I just noticed you haven't updated in a year. That makes me really, really sad. Please, continue this story, it's brilliant.

Thank you for writing,

Xx

Fantastic read! I hope my fics match this quality.

Also... will there be more? Is there another chapter?

Just a note... you are masterful at tying in tidbits of info.

I was a little concerned at the pace of the story at first, but you have integrated everyone so very well... including Ursa. Emotion captured through expression and action. Well done.

Since i am too sick to try to sleep, I think I will continue to be lost in your world a while more.

HAHAHAHAHA!

I died of laughter when Zuko sang that lude song.

Wel done all the way around with this story so far. I'll keep reading.

Nice job.

Pallet, not palate. Great story, by the way.

are u writing any more?

Your fic is awesome. I'm sorry I can't really say much more, because there is /so/ much more to it. I have read the whole thing, but over a few days. My memory sucks, if it wasn't blatantly obvious by my obvious attempt at making an excuse for this crummy review. I think Azula's a bit... docile, post-war, here. However, there are times when your mind snaps in a way that makes you just more... flat, you know? I guess it could have worked that way for Azula, even though you'd expect her to go crazier than a kangaroo/crocodile hybrid on crack cocaine. Whatevers. You've got some interesting OCs in this fic, too. I appreciate Honcho's blindness and Nozomi's total lack of personality. It makes things more realistic. I mean, if /I/ was raised from six months old to live and breath for some guy, I'd be lacking a personality in a Godawful way. That's society for you. Pakku also wins. Pretty much everything about this fic wins, except maybe the whole lavabending concept. Thing. x: I don't know, but my canon-senses are like, on steroids and so yeah I'm a loser. (:

Plzwritemoar?

Great story! You write Zuko so well! I loved Zuko's travels, meeting his mother, and telling off Azula in this here chapter. XD (And a lot more stuff but I'm too lazy to say. :P) Amazing work, can't wait until next chapter!

HOLY CRAP! This is incredible! It's a masterpiece! You should finish this as soon as possible! It's too good to leave incomplete! You're a master when it comes to writing. Please update soon!

Are planning to continue with this, even though Season 3 started? Please do. I love reading Alternate Season fics, and I really like this one. And it has an OC that's not a Mary Sue. Yay, for the non-Sue-ness!

Simply amazing!

Yay! I'm so happy to see an update! Somewhat of a Christmas present to your loyal followers?

That said, I must admit that this chapter seemed a bit rushed. Its hard to say, but you didn't seem to expound in it quite as much as usual. I realize that you can't update quickly and be as descriptive at the same time, and I DO appreciate the quick update, but I still felt it appropriate to point out the issue I noticed.

Nonetheless, there were some great parts in it. I am suprised at your decision regarding Zuko and your OC: you truly had me believing that Zuko was just going to shoot that down from his conversation with Toph. This was a suprising twist.

The council was also a good idea. An excellent way to keep Azula from ever gaining power. I assume that you either read about the Fire Nation's original government in "The Lost Scrolls" or read the information on wikipedia (like me).