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mistressKC - wanteddeadoralive
2009-11-01 . chapter 19
Amazing story telling. I was looking for a good story to read after reading Vathara's Embers, and I'm glad that I have found yours. I'm surprised that it doesn't have more reviews. The best compliment I can come up with is you've written a really great story. Keep doing what you're doing :)
CinnamonStuff
2009-03-10 . chapter 19
Woow, this is a great story! I really love how you made Zuko a round character, that he's actually evolving. Your writing is entertaining, pleasant and flawless, and your ideas are just wonderful. I have no idea if you plan on some romance, but personally, I'm fond of your ZukoToph-scenes.

I just noticed you haven't updated in a year. That makes me really, really sad. Please, continue this story, it's brilliant.

Thank you for writing,

Xx
ScarletCougar
2009-03-01 . chapter 19
Fantastic read! I hope my fics match this quality.

Also... will there be more? Is there another chapter?
ScarletCougar
2009-03-01 . chapter 15
Just a note... you are masterful at tying in tidbits of info.
ScarletCougar
2009-03-01 . chapter 9
I was a little concerned at the pace of the story at first, but you have integrated everyone so very well... including Ursa. Emotion captured through expression and action. Well done.

Since i am too sick to try to sleep, I think I will continue to be lost in your world a while more.
ScarletCougar
2009-02-28 . chapter 2
HAHAHAHAHA!

I died of laughter when Zuko sang that lude song.

Wel done all the way around with this story so far. I'll keep reading.
Chimera89
2009-02-28 . chapter 19
Nice job.
Chimera89
2009-02-28 . chapter 8
Pallet, not palate. Great story, by the way.
Aya-Shoru
2009-01-21 . chapter 19
are u writing any more?
Leathe
2008-11-19 . chapter 19
Your fic is awesome. I'm sorry I can't really say much more, because there is /so/ much more to it. I have read the whole thing, but over a few days. My memory sucks, if it wasn't blatantly obvious by my obvious attempt at making an excuse for this crummy review. I think Azula's a bit... docile, post-war, here. However, there are times when your mind snaps in a way that makes you just more... flat, you know? I guess it could have worked that way for Azula, even though you'd expect her to go crazier than a kangaroo/crocodile hybrid on crack cocaine. Whatevers. You've got some interesting OCs in this fic, too. I appreciate Honcho's blindness and Nozomi's total lack of personality. It makes things more realistic. I mean, if /I/ was raised from six months old to live and breath for some guy, I'd be lacking a personality in a Godawful way. That's society for you. Pakku also wins. Pretty much everything about this fic wins, except maybe the whole lavabending concept. Thing. x: I don't know, but my canon-senses are like, on steroids and so yeah I'm a loser. (:

Plzwritemoar?
ActionFry
2008-10-15 . chapter 19
Great story! You write Zuko so well! I loved Zuko's travels, meeting his mother, and telling off Azula in this here chapter. XD (And a lot more stuff but I'm too lazy to say. :P) Amazing work, can't wait until next chapter!
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2008-06-16 . chapter 19
HOLY CRAP! This is incredible! It's a masterpiece! You should finish this as soon as possible! It's too good to leave incomplete! You're a master when it comes to writing. Please update soon!
babu'sbff
2008-04-07 . chapter 19
Are planning to continue with this, even though Season 3 started? Please do. I love reading Alternate Season fics, and I really like this one. And it has an OC that's not a Mary Sue. Yay, for the non-Sue-ness!
superkawaiifoxy
2008-01-09 . chapter 19
Simply amazing!
sev7n
2007-12-26 . chapter 19
Yay! I'm so happy to see an update! Somewhat of a Christmas present to your loyal followers?

That said, I must admit that this chapter seemed a bit rushed. Its hard to say, but you didn't seem to expound in it quite as much as usual. I realize that you can't update quickly and be as descriptive at the same time, and I DO appreciate the quick update, but I still felt it appropriate to point out the issue I noticed.

Nonetheless, there were some great parts in it. I am suprised at your decision regarding Zuko and your OC: you truly had me believing that Zuko was just going to shoot that down from his conversation with Toph. This was a suprising twist.

The council was also a good idea. An excellent way to keep Azula from ever gaining power. I assume that you either read about the Fire Nation's original government in "The Lost Scrolls" or read the information on wikipedia (like me).
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