 RenoBites44 2009-09-20 . chapter 1Wow… this story is so sad… and pretty. I love it. The style that you wrote this story in suits it really well. <3
~RenoBites44 |
 Supreme Dictator of the World 2008-07-01 . chapter 1the song by dido really reflects this fic and draco's hardships. i listened to the song while listening to this and it made everything tie together perfectly. this was an awesome fic.
ciao |
 Mariel Nightstalker 2007-11-22 . chapter 1I was going to write something like this but never got around to it. It would sucked anyway, but you did this idea beautifully.
Can we get married?
Mara |
 stardragon12 2007-05-19 . chapter 1That was a truely beautiful take on the Harry and Draco pairing. There was much pain and was just so hard to read without crying. I love how you put this together. Nice job. |
 leggo-my-legolas 2007-04-28 . chapter 1wow. |
 where-my-heart-resides 2007-04-06 . chapter 1Beautiful. A bit hurried, a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but beautifully written none the less. |
 natilie7 2007-03-26 . chapter 1OMG, that was so sweet and sad at the same time. it made me cry. thnat was the first time a story made me cry! |
 lobelia07 2007-03-18 . chapter 1WTF? Because Harry wouldn't be intelligent enough to take him to the hospital wing? I'm not sure I get it - it just seems like it was really, really hurried, so it lacks a certain flow. Melodramatic in a way, and a bit too choppy. Use spell check. I do like the song though. |
 katherine 2007-03-17 . chapter 1 beautifully written & poignant...I love the way you describe their interactions and i love the point of view...
and basically, the whole thing
one comment though, I think you meant 'bled' and not 'bleed' --but seriously I could find absolutely no other fault within your entire story..you have incredible talent for writing.
Katherine |
 sara 2007-03-16 . chapter 1 aww..omg, i cried! amazing and sad |
 Lucky Sins 2007-03-16 . chapter 1I don't say this very often
Actually I don't think I've ever said it but...
That was beautiful
I loved it |