it was alright. I don't know about the song you chose...
No offence. It was good.

hey

cute story

whos the song by or did you make it up

btw check my story out

o this is really good! and i love the song! thats one of my favorites!! i cant wait to read more!

OMG! I love this! You displayed Edward's emotions over Bella's wish to be converted into a vampire!

~*~Twilightluvr~*~