Oh wow, that was amazing! Your fics always make my day just that much better, and this is no exception! Hah, I'm still laughing! I knew they were having sex! Especially since Roxas was so elusive :D Thanks for writing this great fic! It was awesome!

gotta admit. . . Puh thought Aku was being raped

Ah, seriously, I thought Axel had a weird fetish of getting hurt. I mean it. Those explainings were just too unbelievable. But, it's not that smart doing it on the rooftop, is it?
Anyway, funny fanfiction. I liked how Axel, every time, just succeed in getting more and more hurt.
Loved it!

Best fic I've ever read.

Haha. I loved the way you ended the story. "how on earth does Axel get injured more during sex than we do during actual fights?" giggle. absolutely loved that line.

OMG!! xD that was soo awesome! saw a reference for this on somebodies profile and i HAD to read it!! xD They are rough!! Lol thanks for the story! i cant wait to read more of your stuff!

Epicly hilarious; it nearly made my malt shoot out my nose!

*Fangirl Squeal of Epic Proportions*

AkuRoku smut! Yes!! XD XD

The mystery behind Axel's deforming, horrible injuries as well as that one line ("Oh, Xemmy, give it to me harder!") just totally made this fic worth the stomachaches and sudden anemia it gave me. From laughing so much. And spouting nosebleeds of XemmyXSaix-induced proportions. XD

Dualism, you are an Amazing writer.
needs to include a bolding and italicizing function to its review-writing tools. I don't think plain capitalization can convey just how much I mean Amazing when I say Amazing. XD


(*snicker* I'm still cracking up over that "Oh, Xemmy, give it to me harder!" line. Seriously, one of the funniest things I've heard in a while. XD)

Oh my gosh, this is absolutely hilarious! I love it

Hilarious, good characterization, and pairings that I love... what more could I ask for in a one-shot?

Have I ever told you how many times I've read this story and loved it every single time and then realized, "Wait. I never reviewed this, did I?" Well, I'm saying so now.

:D

Oh Axel, you can't have non-lying hips gracefulness all the time.

Thanks a lot. I think I'm going to be sent to the hospital for not being able to breathe from laughing, and then the pyscho ward for bursting out into fits of laughter and yelling "HE HAD A CONCUSSION!" randomly during the day as little bits of this pop into my head.

That was hot and hilarious. I love it.

Two words:
Epic
Laughter :))

I couldn't stop laughing, seriously, I really couldn't stop laughing. And since I was listening to the llama song while reading this it looked like I had a red-faced, tear-inducing seizure.

Poor Axel and Roxas! They have sex and Axel ends up getting hurt, hahahaha. ^^ And their friends ends up traumatized with Sora and Riku most likely hooking up and Demyx with a very sore bottom the next day (Not to mention a satisfied, smug Zexion!) Ah, I can imagine already! Lol.

One of my most loved lines in this and wil save in future references:

“Well, gee, guys,” Axel muttered, slinging his book bag off his shoulder and onto the floor, squeezing into the seat beside Roxas. “Nice to know I’ve got classmates who care about my self esteem.”

Zexion raised an eyebrow, glancing the redhead over. “You look like a Picasso painting. You don’t deserve self-esteem.”

Kairi rolled her eyes and stood, walking over to Axel and poking at his face. The almost painfully-thin boy yelped and scooted his chair back, but Kairi followed. “What happened to your face?” she mumbled curiously, as if struggling to decipher a complex mathematical equation. “Your eye? Your cheek? Your poor, poor nose?! Was it always tilted at that angle?”

God, gotta love Kairi and Zexion for caring but also for swhoing how much of an idiot Axel can be. XP Haha, I hope you make something like this in the future.

-In Imaginary Land From,
Willow's.Pond

this was perfect! loved it!