Its not fair...

ITS NOT FAIR DAMMIT! T-T

That was pretty much what I kept saying to myself during the story. Well written and it has a great, yet incredibly sad story. And if you must know I did shed tears throughout the whole thing. Which means you did a damn good job at this story. Not too comfortable with Alexandra with...well being greener than her mother. But i'm not a writer so meh >_>.

Anyone can write a happy story, it takes a true writer to write a sad story makes the reader feel the same as the characters.

WTF! Man I can't believe you f*cking did that. I cried the entire time! I caught sight of Shego's grave before I got to it, I read ahead a little and started crying. I cried alot during the song as well. It was a good story but WTF! :(

This story mad me cry T^T I HATE sad stories. *nods* they should always be happy T^T

I've read various KP fics (Probably more the series episodes I've seen), but this is the first one with my favourite character dying so... can't really help but to feel sad.

The point here is that there are two ways to deal with a character's death. The easy one which implies "He died, let's move on" and almost forget about the character, OR, my favourite case, in which the character's death influence so much for the history that it's like the character still has a role after dying. I hope that, for this MIB universe, the second case applies. Probably it will, considering Alexandra.

I was quite surprised by the look you gave to this new character, specially comparing her with Shin. (Ideas of universe crossing and a meeting between Shin and Alexandra are moving around my mind. DAMN YOU PLOT BUNNIES!)

Ahem! Well, considering all the possible ideas that you have for this MIB universe, I'm sure its development can be quite interesting. Can't help but to expect a few twist. Heck, I just can't wait to see more of it.

I'm afraid I have nothing else to say, but well, it was a good one-shot and a good way to begin an alternative path. Seems like I'm not the only one with a lot in my head.

Oh, well. See ya next time!

So long as this universe doesn't continue that much I'll be fine with it. I don't know why, but I just can't handle the idea of Shego dying that well. But it does sound like an interesting idea. Though, I kinda thought of the green streak in Alexandra's hair to be more of a lock that is just at the front. Anyway, I thought that this moved quite well. Thanks for posting it. I actually enjoyed it. Aside from Shego dying of course. -_^

that was nicely written, sad but really well written. i wonder what would happen if somewhere along the way you had both daughters cross paths. it would be interesting to see there interaction. probably also heart wrenching if this kim-b were to see kim-a's shego alive and well.

Aw, this is so sad. Poor Kim, losing the person she loves and having to raise their child alone. I wish her well.

Very sad but well written story and your explanation of how it came to be was very interesting.

Ya know you actually made me want to beat the living crap out of Shego's parents... a couple of bastard if ya ask me.

I kinda like morbid endings but this fic was just too.. well not an ending I would have liked in the originl "MI" Universe.

Another thing was that Kim's reaction to her daughter seemed kinda negative at first, either she was REALLY hoping to have a normal looking child or she was not expecting a replica of Shego.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

*blubbers* You, you, you killed Shego! *wah* Some powerful imagery there... *sniffs* I need to read Sweet Revenge again to take me out of this angst :(

"don’t think I’ll be doing anything else"?

Kim raising a super-powered child on her own? (well, possibly with Ron.) This calls for more than a one or two shot. This could be the dawn of a new universe. As much as I enjoy the MI storyline, in it's own way this could be just as amazing.