This was a really great fic! I liked how you had Henry and Betty going out and spending time together and learning so much about each other, even if it was only as friends. But the best part was having Betty finally realize how wonderful Henry really is, and that she needed to take the risk of changing their relationship to much more than friendship!

Very sweet. I have two favorite parts: when Marc realizes Betty's first on the list, and when Justin receives the gift from Henry. Both made me smile widely.

Thanks for sharing.

Very nice.

The dialogues were in keeping with the characters, and this ties up the thread left by 'the choice'.

I liked the easy camaderie between Daniel and Betty - discreet yet concerned about her personal welfare. But I think the relationship between Henry and Bety makes more believable material (plus I rather like the actor who plays Henry...lol)

what a wonderful story! well, i'm a strictly henry/betty fan. this was truly needed after the way the show ended thursday (heartbreaking and depressing) i read it prior to the change about baseball- like the change you did to the story - works wonderfully. glad you revisited the story. there was whooping and cheering from this house at the end of this story - hoping the show will also do justice to h/b. keep up the great writing!

Wonderful story. Heartwarming and fulfilling. Very visual as well.
Glad you decided to follow up to the original story.

This was absolutely wonderful! Beautifully written and very much in character. Superb follow up to your last story. Of course my favorite bit was the Daniel/Betty interaction, but I also really loved the very end of this piece with Betty and Henry. Very sweet story!

Loved the story even though I am a Detty shipper all the way :) Keep up the good work!