I've read this story 3 times already, and each time it touches something deep within me... It's so beautiful. The whole thing with their fathers, how they had to give up their love because of their families... It was just so sad. I cried many times. Each time Sasuke hurt Naruto, how Gaara felt hearbroken, how Itachi couldn't have his freedom... But it was also very sweet and romantic. Their friendship and innocence when they were children, it was all just so cute. Not to mention Kyuubi and Sasuke's jealousy because of her. :] All in all, my favorite story of all stories with this pairing, and I've read a lot.

Thanks for writing this. (:

... Fugaku is so strict...

... It's cute I like the present/past setting, makes me understand it.. ...

... TUC?? Hmn... Odd, can you please refresh my memory?? ...


... Anyways, I like this ...

... I just checked your profile, and found a story of yours labeled as The Uchiha Couple, it seems distant from this other story of yours... ...

I can just feel a lot of emotions in this and i knwo i'm going to cry later on... i can feel it.

Love this story its brilliant!

Oh dear God.

I need a minute to think of what I have to say so I don't leave anything out...

Okay, I often review other fics saying they're good, great, sometimes even brilliant but this... This is quite possibly the best fanfic I have ever read in my entire life. Not one of the best SasuNaru fics, not the best SasuNaru fic, *the* best piece of fanfiction I've ever read.

The build up is so good, it literally took my breath away.
Showing Sasuke and Naruto's relationship develop from when they were children up until they were young adults is incredible.
I don't even know how you guys pulled it off, it was like the build up of my dreams that no fanfic before had never been able to pull off.
You managed to portray everything that was expected by SasuNaru if they had gotten together romantically. Confusion, realization, slight disgust, happiness, insecurity, fear, all without slipping once.

And the emotion, oh God. When they were happy, I was happy, when they laughed, I laughed and when they cried, I quite literally cried.
Especially when Sasuke broke up with Naruto, tears wouldn't stop streaming down my face. It was as if the break up hit me as hard as it hit them.

I love how you revealed in the end that it was Itachi all along who was messing with their heads, I didn't see that coming.
I really couldn't hate Itachi or even feel annoyed with him because I wanted him to have freedom as well, even if it meant hurting Naruto and Sasuke in the process. It doesn't really make sense to me, but I tend to not question how my mind works.

The way you still kept the tension, the love, exciting between Sasuke and Naruto from beginning to end baffles me. Usually, in other fics, the tension is stripped away when the first kiss occurs or the first love making but here it stayed, not leaving once, not even in the last chapter.

Speaking of love making, their first time was so incredible.
You could really feel the love between Sasuke and Naruto when they were in that motel room and oh Lord, I nearly cried when Sasuke told Naruto, Naruto was beautiful. The moment they had was so real and heartfelt and personal. It was just, beautiful.

I think the biggest plot twist was when you revealed that Fugaku and Arashi had a romantic relationship. I had predicted that early on but then dismissed the thought, thinking it was ridiculous.
At that moment, it explained why Fugaku had acted like such a prick and I could finally understand (not that I approved of it, still hated his guts).

You wrote in your warnings that the fic was OOC, I completely disagree.
The character were so in character, it was ridiculous. Especially for them, since they live in a AU world and not their normal ninja world.

The way you portrayed Sakura's and Ino's heartbreak is something applaud you for. No fic I have read has ever done that, which made it even more realistic and even more in character.
How Sakura finally accepted them in the end just made me happy and that made me respect her because what she did must have taken a lot of courage and been incredibly hard. I know I wouldn't be able to have done what she did.

I have a ton of other things in mind (and plenty of things I am sure I have forgotten, and will beat myself up about once I hit the review button) but I'll cut myself off here before I've used up all of the word limitation.
This story was perfect, nothing less than that.

I loved it, this fic will always hold a special place in my heart.

Brilliant, *brilliant* work you two.

poor arashi, now not ONLY does itachi need therapy, but now arashi too! ROFL

come to think of it... after that...
wow
dinners must be tense
lol

It really funny. I was just listening to At The Beginning. Loved the first chapter!

this story has me captivated , the angst the trials and errors that our famous couple has to go throught and did go. your writing style is the best so far that i have read i wish that i could write like that . your lemons limes and sneak peaks were the best i couldnt believe how good they are .

great work

“There’ll be a bloodbath over his second button,” the redhead predicted bluntly making the rest frown. That would be the worst case scenario. Damn admirers!

Um,. what is this 'second button' issue about?
Thanks.

Cheers

Thousands praises for XKunoichiofthePaintbrushX and asashouryuu.. some of the plot really took me by surprise.
THe 1st chapter has already captured my attention and shown much promise of a good story.
So far the rest has exceeded expectation.
Well, good job for penning down this fic, I can't wait to finish reading everything.
(on second thought, I think I'll enjoy it slowly)
Thank you for the story.

Cheers

Wow! that was HOT! And Itachi was just so cute! *huggles* I also enjoyed how, as they grew up, both the plot and the writing style became more complex. Was that intentional or just a natural evolution as the story progressed?

I really enjoy reading your story. I like it a lot that's why I could'nt stop reading it yesterday evening. I was sleepy all day, but I woud like to know if sasu and naru were together in the end. yes they are. You are a wonderful writer. congratulation ! see you soon with a new project

I luvles(love-le+s) this story. I read it on my phone though, so I didn't review the chapters, but I will hopefully remedy that soon! This is so good, it made me want to cry and suffle and huggle my teddy puppy! ./. So kawaii and sugoii.

i like how this chapter shows how comfortable naruto and sasuke are together after being in a relationship for awhile now. you can see the consideration they have for each other as well as the tender moments they share. the festival was light and fun and i liked how you revisited the moment when they first saw fireworks together.

i really liked how you wrote naruto and sasuke getting hot and heavy simultaneously with arashi coming home and eventually entering the room. cutting back and for gave me a sense of how both things were unfolding at the same moment in time and it made the build up of suspense all the more suspenseful! great job :)