wow plz continue!

this is great so far! Plz continue!

That is EXACTLY what I'm doing with my Spider-Man thing, writing ahead on the sequel... Awesome chapter, by the way. As always, I look forward to more.

MJ

This is great so far...but what does "Plump" mean? Plz continue!

this is great so far! can't wait for you to continue

It would be interesting to read the missing sexy scenes. I like this story. Keep up the good writing.

this is really good so far! Plz continue!

Wow. James Norrington IS going to everything to get his wife. I like that. :) Great twist in the story, aye.

Update!

...hm. Actiony. Actiony's good. I like action.

Um...more please? **hopeful smile**

MJ
Proud President of S.A.F.E.

Still short, but what can you do? Another cliffhanger...good as usual. I look forward to more.

MJ-Skywalker
Proud Prsident of S.A.F.E.

wow this just got good! I can't wait for you to coninue! =] update soon!

Great chapters.

To me, I like Norrington, slightly, speicly without that wing, looking like a Pirate. :) Would James go that far to "save" his wife, to became a pirate, like Will to save Elishbath? idk, its up to you.

Update!

So that's how Jack meets Ket, but how will he meet Kuno? Update soon!

Hm...I have a feeling Norrington's not going to be very happy with Jack and co. for stealing his wife. Yeah, not happy at all. Great chapter, as always...I'm looking forward to when Jack meets Kat.

Until further,
MJ
Proud President of S.A.F.E.

This is getting interesting. Update soon!