I read this story over at the Standoff board, and i love it here just as much as I did there!

It is a great idea, it just gets muddled in the writing because it is difficult to figure out who is saying what. The idea is great though and deffinately has room to expand on if you choose to.

i liked it but next time tell who is in what scene. otherwise great stroy.

I loved this, especially the Lia/Duff. That was so cute!

Awe i loved it! that was so good is there anymore?

JJ:P