Wow, quite a unique piece of work. However a little unexpected that Squall would suddenly kiss Selphie like that, it's possible. The mixture of thoughts and story was slightly difficult to read, but that's okay. Lovely fic, thanks for writing.

I know it's an old fic, but it's worth a note! This was really cute, Selphie and Squall both, and the dress was a well-used plot device. I particularly liked the opening, vaguely yet effectively introducing the conflict.

That ol' blockhead Squall is finally learning some tact, eh?

(I did crack up so hard and wrong at the "faceful of box" line, but it's still a fun fic all-around.)

aw..._ This was cute. I loved how sweet Squall was, and how awkward he was. XD The format was a little strange, however. It made it kind of hard to read. Double spacing between paragraphs, perhaps? Either way, I loved it. GREAT FIC! )

That was very sweet. And awkward. I love awkward moments, dammit. It seemed very realistic, and Squall. . . I wanted to pet him. I guess Rinoa would call Angelo to maul me, but yeah. I enjoyed the dialogue; I think it flowed very well. A very sweet story, and it was just what I wanted to read right now. Thanks for the quick read.

Really cute and sweet.

*squeal* omg i loved that.

Man you're good! it was sweet in a feel good kind of way. more power to you! :)

This is so cute ; I read it a long time ago, I guess that I never reviewed, but god, I love it to pieces!

wow, this is really good. and i cant think of anything else to put! :S keep up the good work! :D

Interesting, a Squelphie, or whatever the strange moniker would be. Actually, I toyed with doing a pairing like this for On Earth as it is in Hell (I believe you only read the first few chapters, for which I apoligize since they are romance free) but I settled for a more conventional Squinoa Zelphie setting. Good job though. Oh, and a quick note, are you the same Zachere that edits DK's stories?

Heh, This story makes me want more Squall/Selphies!

Oh come on, Z. That was fricking beautiful. It just kills me - even when you think you wrote something that sucks it's great. That ending brought tears to my eyes - do you know how hard that is to do?

Okies, the story is older and I don't even know if you'll get the review, but I just want to let you know I LOVED the story _

I've always thought there's a case to be made for a Squall/Selphie pairing. It's nice to see someone pull it off so elegantly. Bravo.

Actually, it does not suck, quite the contrary. It's an original twist on Selphie and Squall's personalities. Furthermore, it's sweet and pleasant to read. Please don't put yourself down ;)