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| always me never you 2007-10-03 ch 21, | abusethat was amazing absolutly fantastic As for the nexy story I have not seen the next one and think the POV should be a mixture of everyone or just third person |
| dreamer 3097 2007-06-21 ch 21, | abuseu think it would be good in thrid person |
| dreamer 3097 2007-05-31 ch 20, | abusei think it should be from a outsiders point of view |
| dreamer 3097 2007-05-28 ch 19, | abusethis is good |
| detachedangel777 2007-05-28 ch 19, | abusei love this story, It's really interesting it pulled me in. Update soon oh I like group 2's names |
| Kyori Uchiha of the Sand 2007-05-28 ch 18, | abuseI like group 2 names best! |
| dreamer 3097 2007-05-19 ch 18, | abusegroup one i love those names |
| dreamer 3097 2007-05-17 ch 17, | abusethis is good nice song |
| dreamer 3097 2007-05-07 ch 16, | abusethis is good |
| Heart's Eclipse 2007-05-06 ch 16, | abuseno no no!! thats NOT cool!! i'm crying now!! i'm seriously bawling my eyes out! update soon!! :)(: |
| dreamer 3097 2007-05-04 ch 15, | abusethat is horrible poor jordan |
| Heart's Eclipse 2007-05-04 ch 14, | abuseOH NO!! don't kill jordan!! who shot him? update soon!! :)(: |
| dreamer 3097 2007-05-03 ch 14, | abuseplease let him be alright |
| dreamer 3097 2007-05-03 ch 13, | abusegood chapter |
| Heart's Eclipse 2007-04-29 ch 12, | abusei like Tommy! update soon!! :)(: |