 Reinbeauchaser 2007-09-13 . chapter 1THAT was funny. Loved it. I don't recall Mondo the Gecko, but then it was my kids who were into the TMNT's back in the 90's, not me so much, although NOW I am. At my age, I should be enjoying grandkids (but my own kids are taking their sweet time getting around to marrying and having little squirts), so I spend my time writing and reading TMNT fic - such as yours. :0) Reading, that is. LOL I figure, once I do have grandkids and once they get into cartoons, I'll be right alongside them watching, too. I'm getting good practice, after all. :0)
Anyway, I've read all of your TMNT stuff so far and am impressed with your very tight writing style. Yes, maybe you need to work a little more background and description into your stories, but - my goodness, you have dialogue down so well, I really don't miss the painted word pictures at all. You're quite witty, too! Love your humor.
Good job!
Be blessed,
Rene' |