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Reviews for: Return of the Mondo
Reinbeauchaser
2007-09-13 . chapter 1
THAT was funny. Loved it. I don't recall Mondo the Gecko, but then it was my kids who were into the TMNT's back in the 90's, not me so much, although NOW I am. At my age, I should be enjoying grandkids (but my own kids are taking their sweet time getting around to marrying and having little squirts), so I spend my time writing and reading TMNT fic - such as yours. :0) Reading, that is. LOL I figure, once I do have grandkids and once they get into cartoons, I'll be right alongside them watching, too. I'm getting good practice, after all. :0)

Anyway, I've read all of your TMNT stuff so far and am impressed with your very tight writing style. Yes, maybe you need to work a little more background and description into your stories, but - my goodness, you have dialogue down so well, I really don't miss the painted word pictures at all. You're quite witty, too! Love your humor.

Good job!

Be blessed,
Rene'
Kariko
2007-06-12 . chapter 1
Ha! Who doesn't love to poke fun at mutants every once in a while? ;)
eeveemew
2007-04-12 . chapter 1
I am so fond of humorous stories.
LadyPirate13
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
that was so funny write more like this, please!
Gadoken King
2007-03-23 . chapter 1
I'm terrified to know what sort of magazines a teenage mutated turtle would have under his mattress. But geez, i haven't heard Mondo's name in forever.
Jalani
2007-03-18 . chapter 1
I haven't read many Archie Comics of the TMNT but it looks really interesting especially the prospects of that friendship. You did really well with it.
Smoogee
2007-03-17 . chapter 1
Ahahahaha! Awesome! I'm still giggling. Mikey and Mondo are so cool. I'm now gonna go around saying that to random people at the mall, "Make me a sandwich, or I'll tell everyone about the magazines under your mattress."

I luff woo!

-Bruce
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