this is how the story should have ended. remus and tonks shouldn't have died at all!

great job

This is fantastic. Realisitic, sophistacated, and fluffy ;) Keep up the good work!

Sweet story! I loved it! Although, somehow I missed what exactly happened to Fred - a curse, some technicolour brains...? :P

This was *beautifully* written. In fact, I just may prefer this to the actual DH novel! xD But, really. You captured the pain, the hope, everything, really quite perfectly. Great job. :D

This was good. This was really, really good.

"Life goes on." Isn't it strange how all those old cliches we always hear acquire deeper meaning when we actually live them? Stories end. Living doesn't. I think this fic may have given me my profound thought for the day. I appreciate it, and your writing. Good work!

Another great fic! This one was a little depressing to read, but of course, that was your intention, as you set the mood to be that one of a time in the aftermath of war. I love the way you included an insight on the lives of other characters and how they came out of the war. The last bit was just delicious! XD

Great job!

oh LOVELY...ohohohoh that was just so...
Wow
I just think you did it wonderfully, it wasn't ridiculously fluffy, it wasn't too angsty, it just hit it perfectly.
*dances off*
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxo

Squee!

I never read HP fic usually, but I'm so glad I read this one! It's awesome. :)

oh, wow. i simply adored this. not only am i amused by this ending to a story having the theme of not being an ending to a story (how mindblowing!), but i think it's such a spot-on portrayal of what could happen. it seems like... i don't know, a bit of a cop out if everything ended all hunky-dory. instead, here you've got things to mourn and things to celebrate for, and confusion surrounding it all. and i think that's just a wonderful balance.
so, as always, fabulous job. :)

Excellent story. Very well written and quite touching. Heart wrenching is a good description, but a sweet ending.

Oh I loved this evenif it did depress me, I can;t get over poor Fred. I felt so bad for George=[

Excellent! When I first saw this entire one-shot was 10,0 words I was kind of wary to read it, but I'm glad I did. This is beautifully written, very much what I imagine will happen after the Final Battle. The whole dynamic of Fred and George being broken somehow in the aftermath is another favorite of mine. I'm going to go check now for anything else you've written!