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kerplank
2009-11-23 . chapter 2
This story made me all happy inside. Thanks for a wonderful story that did not butcher the characters, as many that I have read tonight have.
celinae
2009-07-16 . chapter 2
Almost not enough Dramione for my tastes, but the portrayal of Hermione's pov more than made up for it. XD
pamelawright
2009-05-23 . chapter 2
This is wonderful. Refreshingly light in it's delivery, but substantial notwithstanding. You are added to my favorites, love your style and handling of tough subjects. It is one of the first fics I have read that really delve into what it would be like to actually LIVE in this world JKR created. Brilliant, thank you for sharing.
wolfpack3422
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
Hey there, great story. I just wanted to stay a little while after I read this I heard a country song called 'Fall' by Clay Walker and oh my gosh does it fit this story! I might even reread this or the 2nd chapter and listen to the song, it's crazy. Now that I've said that...you're writing and insight are AMAZING! Bravo!
Gwinna
2008-12-29 . chapter 2
I love this! Your characterization is excellent, really one of the most IC stories I’ve seen. I also like how you handled the war and its effects on everyone – it’s realistic, and believable for all involved, but there’s still hope and happiness and humor, it’s not completely depressing. Actually it left me grinning and feeling happy at the end. :D Thanks for writing!
smaginn
2008-12-18 . chapter 2
i love it, i love it, i love it
the way draco suddenly managed to get a job, and use the telephone makes me wonder...
lili44
2008-11-26 . chapter 2
I loved this fic

it was beautiful

I cried when Draco was comforting hermione

well done it was lovely
Catastrophic.Composer.
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
wow i loved this story! great job!
RandomDream
2008-08-16 . chapter 2
Dramatic :)

Lavander's... a bit idiotic. Ron's stupid and absolutely tactless and Harry is NOT broken. Not one bit. Ooh. And Ginny's demanding.

Thanks :p Sweetheart
vampgirl8
2008-07-01 . chapter 2
I really enjoyed this, and the inner emotions Hermione felt were clearly displayed. I enjoyed reading this thoroughly, and commend you for your splendid work. Amazing work of literature, especially considering it's fanfiction; which is rarely as well written in most cases. Thank you for your spectacular work.
Okay, enough with the stuffy review. Dude! That was totally awesome! So, cool! Thanks much, man! Hope I find more like this to read! Later!
Aufera
2008-06-07 . chapter 2
Brilliant! The best Draco quotes ever :) ('Hard to put your finger on it, isn't it?') Couldn't stop laughing!
Kyas.
2008-03-26 . chapter 2
Love the story.

I won't flame, but I was just commenting that Hermione and Draco's relationship seemed to progress pretty fast. I mean, they go from learning how to crack an egg to pizza and kisses in one day.

Other than that, great story. (:

Keep it up. ^^
TwinkieTUTUS
2008-03-23 . chapter 2
aww! that was so completely adorable! i can see why it was a winner/
madd09
2008-03-16 . chapter 2
WOW i really liked it
Eicklehart
2008-01-31 . chapter 2
totally awesome - i loved it
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