That was fantastic! So fast-paced that near the end when the Kaveer approached the jumper my heart was racing, I'm not kidding. 'Never Stop Moving' describes it well :).
I loved Teyla's development of learning new skills, and it felt perfectly in character for her. I particularly liked her realization that in the field she wouldn't have to be Zelenka, she'd have to be Rodney... no time for painstaking, by-the-book diagnostics. Great character stuff, too... Rodney treating her like a minion, and being hurt that she went to Zelenka, and Teyla *reacting* like one of his minions, and being bemused by her own reaction. Wonderful team interaction all around.

Will rec ASAP. I hope you'll continue to write in this fandom; your stories always bring me joy.

this story is a great story one of the best SGA stories i have read

This was a great story. I really liked this one. Well actually I like most of the SGA stories you have posted here. The way you have the team helping each other and looking out for the members is great. You really expand on the characters and stuff its great. I really liked this one where Teyla decided to expand her learning so she could help the team more and then at the end Ronan also decided to do the same only in a different field. That is wonderful and them both knowing more will only help. thx for posting your wonderful stories and I hope to read more.

That was good. The whumpping was very heavy duty and Teyla's POV was very cool. Can only say nice things about this. Thanks.

Great story

This was fabulous. I really liked the look into Teyla's character showing her motivations and developments in a way that I haven't seen before but greatly appreciate. You also showed the team dynamics (which was what had originally attracted me to this fandom) wonderfully. This was just a really good story and a very enjoyable one.

Although I think my favorite scene, the one that made me laugh out loud, was when Zelenka is looking at McKay and calling him a "petty, petty man" and can't wait for him to wake up so that he can tease him.

I'm now off to see what else you've written. Thanks for posting. mg

I started working with a new department--headed by a woman who loves spreadsheets and rule books more than life itself--in the tech company I work for today, and ALL DAY I kept laughing because I couldn't get the line "It's like you went to the boot camp school of project management." out of my head! Do you know how embarassing that is?

That was by far my favorite one of your stories. And Soylent Green was a good movie!

Wow..wonderful story. Total whirlwind ride. Thank you

Wikipedia frightens me.

That was an awesome story. What a ride. Enjoyed it immensley. So much fun to read.

I love how you portray the characters, the details, their little nuiances (sp?). The story lines are fantastic, the action is non-stop and well action packed.

Your stories are fun, intense, tense, frightening and full of little odds and ends.

So much fun to read. thanks for a great story.

We're not buying Canada? Damn it! I say we trade IOWA! for Alberta. And there better be a stipulation about NO RETURNS!

Connam's awesome.

Rodney woke up and tried to be quiet so not to wake anyone else up...that's priceless.

Rodney's head didn't explode.

Many strange dogs indeed! too many cousins, many mishaps! All so believable. Embrace the chaos that comes with bringing home stray troublesome pooches.

Be the Cloud Ronon...good Lord where do you come up with this stuff? I laughed myself silly. It was beautiful.

Teyla speaking to Rodney was perfect. Could see it so clearly and empathize with Teyla...it was understandable that she asked Radek to teach her and yet it would still sting Rodney and Teyla saw that. That was a particulary touching scene.

Still love the stray dog bit. makes me laugh and so brightens this too hot day in the sweltering world that is IOWA!

Wow! that was awesome.

Teyla and Ronon were fantastic. They are in a bit of trouble...but wow!

Sheppard yelling for Carson was a nice way to describe the panic without actually describing the panic.

Did Rodney's head explode?

They did make a mistake! They messed with The Team!

You don't mess with The Team. Not even a little.

Sending the drone to the planet's core would be interesting. I like Sheppard's ideas on those that try to kidnap and torture his friends.

Metra the fool! Commander Cray the dork...they threw away a good thing. So sad.

Is McKay's head going to explode?

Its not the crystal?! Its the connection! He's climbing out to fix it?!

He is correcct-they do need to breathe.

Don't die Rodney! Don't die like a flame! Like a really really faint flame! Just say NO to DEATH!

Have I mentioned how much fun this story is? Its terribly fun. Having a great time with it.

Metra and the evil band no evil doers are closing in. Not good not good at all.

Fix the connection! (oh and I'm very very glad to see Rodney doesn't blame Teyla-that is exceptionally redeeming of him. He is an **-but he is not evil, not even bad, just callous I guess at times). you capture him well.