Well-written. I like the bit with Haru having OCD; nice touch. You've got a way with keeping the characters true to themselves while still making them fit in with the world you place them in.

deep... I swear I can hear Azula really narrating this. Keep it up!

Ooh, good job. I like this a lot. :)

Nice take on things. I liked it. Hope there's more.

*lol* Most amusing. I liked Azula analizing herself much more than Haru.

Anorexic people are tough to break. Most see their ability to shun food as strength and control, perfect for Azula.

I have a friend who fell back into the habit after her ex-girlfriend died. Except she knows what she's doing to herself and part of her wants to punish herself. It's just a big ole mess. Sorry to spill on you.

I just adore this fic... So gritty and real yet peppered with humor. I love your perspective and I simply cannot wait for more. This is just a brilliant take on Haru and Azula together.

As much as I do think this fanfic is completley twisted, the dark and strange sense of humor makes it amazing! I'm kinda sad now that this is done :( And as much as I do enjoy your other stuff, I really think you should do more in this kind of style :D

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This is like so good, though this Haru is quite more...well just cooler, then most vertions I have seeing of him, and I can totally see most of his points, feel kinda bad for him tho, cause in my experience relationships with crazy-ass-bitches (and Azula is definetly one is there ever was one) never end good... hopefully he'll have better luck then I did
Yes they are beautiful, yes they are delightlingly cruel and yes they'll chew you to bits for the kicks of it XDD

I loved it. The pairing's a little unorthodox but your plot(did you have one?) and (mad) writing skills made it enjoyable.

Such a crazy and twisted AU story. I loved it.

Ahh Harula... best crack in the world. Nicely done and VERY IC. I look forward to more.

It was sweet and just a little twisted--after I got over my "This isn't -MY- Haru!" thing. ^^U

Your version's fun, too, though. XDD

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F-ing awesome, dude!

My friend Riley was laughing too...

Wow this is so cool! I love Azula as a crazy psychotic bitch! LOL Well anyway I really like your story and hope you have Azula's POV out soon!!

If anyone has flamed you I'll be the MEANEST reviewer to them because that was pretty funny. Even though I can never see it happening, it was still a good read. Can't wait till the next chapter!