this was one of your more interesting stories. the whole part with the pratical joke in the middle was utterly histrical! was laughing so hard i couldn't breath. sometimes a good laugh is worth just as much as a goodd story, and here there were both. i found it interesting you left it open for the reader to guess where in time things might go for them.

Lovely just lovely a beautiful story

Great work, like always.

How this doesn't have a million reviews, I'll never know. Excellent story, loved it. Can't say anything else.

I have to admit that I normally don't write reviews, but I just HAD to on this one. It was romantic, hilarious, and just plain hot! I laughed out loud when I realized that I couldn't look away from the sex scene and was fumbling around for my cigarettes... it was so good that I needed one myself! I could hear my friends doing the same with the porno music as we always do that at work. It was great! Write more, please!

i loved this story! please write more like this one asap. keep up the great work!

i love it! :D

Another great one-shot by Shawn. You sure do know how to capture the inner turmoil of these two characters. And I loved the "boom chica bow wow". That was hilarious!

I liked how the interaction between Tommy and Kim where and the

point where they got busted by their friends..then Kim's little

trick on Tommy had me lmao..Good story Shawn..is there more like

these swimming up around in ur head waiting to get out on the net!