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-SMILING.ROSE 2008-07-05 ch 4,	abuseCool story so far! I like it so far. I hope you decide to update soon. It's been over a year since you've actually updated. :(
Un!sawr 2008-07-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseAnd just when I got into this pairing, too Dx And not to mention, just when I found out this is one of the very few [emphasis on the 'very few'] DeiSaku ficcies that are worthy enough to be read, it had to go on hiatus. Though I understand most authors need a lot of inspiration/motivation to continue their stories, especially from the direct source, I can't help but feel a bit dead inside. Hopefully, you'll one day find the incentive to continue again. And I shall be lurking, cough. - But back to the ficcy, then again what else can I say that the others already haven't? You weren't kidding when you said it was gonna be twisted, and that is one of the many reasons why I was reading it in the first place. Deidara's childhood was definitely something that just smacked me in the head and stayed there like a dead fly. It helped build up his character to the way he is now. It's nice to have Tobi amidst all that seriousness with his cute, childish humour. I just wanna kidnap him and take him as for my own adopted child D; --And before I start rambling non-stop, I should stop here. && maybe give you a visit on Gaia :P
Gaara is soooo freakin hot 2008-06-19 ch 4,	abuseOMG OMG OMG I cant wait till the next chap i love it Tobi is so cute lol i love him hurry hurry x p.s i cant help but notice you haven't update in a long time so please please please update soon :)
sakura253 2008-06-17 ch 4,	abuseyour good at right storys plz write more! (\ /) (^.^) o( )o (\ /) (O.o) (>
sasusakuluvers4ever 2008-06-16 ch 4,	abusehaha that's funny cause i am extremely lazy too. Actualy the only thing i do is hang around the computer all day. My friends call me lazy cause my naps take about two whole hours if not more.(laughs nervesly)Okay well bye.
cutecrazyice 2008-06-02 ch 4,	abuseWow. This is another one of those DeiSaku fics that made me a fan of the pairing. I love that you kept them in character, especially Sakura. It's true she wouldn't give in easily to Deidara, and that keeps the anticipation longer. Nice work. Hope you update! :)
Hiei's Cute Girl 2008-06-01 ch 4,	abuseAwesome! Deidara's constant bikering with her is amusing, along with Tobi's extreme childishness. Gotta love it! ^^ Best of luck on the makings of the next chapter, and Deidara's success in getting into her pants. XD
riptiderobin21 2008-06-01 ch 1,	abuseAfter re-reading your wonderful fic just now, I couldn't help but wonder when (and if) you would update it. Of course i understand after reading your profile that after what happens to Deidara in the manga, you don't really have the same motivation to continue writing. But really couldn't you update in the memory of Deidara, don't let him die in fanfiction too! Please! But yeah, it's all up to you, i just hope you get the motivation to keep writing Deidara. Not that i was trying to guilt you into it or anything. ^_^
desirae668 2008-03-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseREVIEW, lol, i am still waiting, i cant wait to see what might happen if the o so friendly gang goes into town. and i wonder what will happen with sakuras restriction, man serously, shes ben through enough, right...( NA, lol)let the story continue(and for last review, i ment to say soon not son at the end)id give you a cookie, but i ate them all, so i give you some chocolate becuase of the past easter* i will be waiting >.
Sofia 2008-03-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseThat was awesome! Please tell me you're going to update? And Tobi
Nairo Xana and Jemmi 2008-03-09 ch 4,	abuseXana: Yay! I have found another good Deisaku!! ^0^ I think that makes 3...possibly 4... Anyway, this was really good. I'm very picky about which stories I praise and which I (for lack of better, nicer words) flame, and this is one of the better ones. I like how you have Deidara have no morals at all, because half the writers on fanfiction are under the delusion that he has morals... -.- So, this is really well-written. I didn't catch a single grammer or spelling mistake either, which is decently rare. Great job. Now. One problem. You need to update. PLEASE.
newnoakua 2008-03-02 ch 4,	abuseWell it's a great story that's for sure. You haven't updated in a long while but it's good so I'll keep an eye out for an update. I love the interactions between all the charactors and Tobi is awesome! Love it and keep it up...
Uchiha Haruno clan 2008-03-01 ch 4,	abuseWoow youre great I havent read any story like this before, your one heck of an author! I like your story so much, what you did for Deidara's personality really fit him so well, And I think Tobi is so cute here too, OMG I can't wait what will happend in the next chapter...till then XOXO
XxMiyakaxX 2008-02-08 ch 4,	abusegreat chapter, i can't wait till the next one, ja ne! =D -Miyaka
kristy1452 2008-01-24 ch 4,	abuseawesome story! please update as soon as you can! :D

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