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Bobboky
2009-07-25 . chapter 5
very very good
Prustan
2008-09-15 . chapter 5
Hehe, great stuff. Don't know 3x3 Eyes at all, but that doesn't matter - you've explained it well enough. Looking forward to more, especially the times you'll have me rofl.
Lerris
2008-09-15 . chapter 5
The chapter looks pretty good, if perhaps a little on the short side. Converting the Phoenix people seems like a quite huge change. It will be interesting to see what happens with that.
dogbertcarroll
2008-09-15 . chapter 5
After the guards had dragged Ranma out of the room and shut the door, the door opened once more, revealing a fanged individual...

But did he have three eyes?

Cute bit with the eyes.

Hopefully a Tendo won't become his Wu, that sounds like a disaster just waiting to happen. Shampoo or Ukyou seem better prepared and level headed.

Can we get a translation for the spring mentioned?
Midoriryu
2008-09-15 . chapter 5
Nice to see more of this, thank you.
Rose1948
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
Wow... Awesome 1/2!
Teturo
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
All I can say is it is good the Amazons did not get hit. Pink and Link would cause a new Ice age with their rapidly growing plants absorbing all the carbon dioxide. Not to mention covering the earth with their toxic garden
Dumbledork
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
Excellent.
Sippio
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
Another great story to see updated.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Writing a letter home is the hardest thing to do.
Dragon Man 180
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
Interesting chapter, I can't wait to see the chaos arrive at Phoenix mountain. If Herb ends up in a fight with Ranma and Saffron I would be greatly interested, those three are real power houses.
firelordeg
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
Wow this story is fantastic I can't wait tell you get further in to the story. Thank you for sharing. Please update again a.s.a.l.a.
Sdarian
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
I was kind of hoping to see if the 'beasts' would bond to Ranma. Ah well, maybe next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Progos
2008-09-03 . chapter 4
You, Sir, Madam, or Respected Other, are truly brilliant.
jusenkyo ruler
2008-05-07 . chapter 4
like it
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