That was great. Update soon.

good chapter so update soon.

That was pretty cool. Nice that you didn't try to overdo the ending, as some do. Not every romance story has to end in a marriage or happy old age.

This is a really good story. I love the pairing. The second chapter was best in my opinion. The "action-y" scene in the third chapter could have been more drawn-out, though. It seems like you wanted to rush through it to get to the part about Hermione's miscarriage. I also don't think the little part with Teddy and Victoire was necessary. I think you just wanted to add a little indication of what would happen in the epilogue of DH.

Your writing style is pretty good. Not spectacular, but descriptive and easy to read. There were a a few spelling errors, but not enough to really hamper the story.

I hope you write more with this pairing.

Just so you know,bharati is 'girl' name.no exception i.e. it is never used as boy's name.bharat,is the male version.
sorry for my english.

Outstanding chapter to an outstanding story.

gunny

Outstanding chapter, this is really good.

gunny

Good start. Love the non canon stories as they are more interesting, you can only say the same thing so many ways.

gunny

Great story.

Good story, I usually don't read other than Harry / Hermione, but this one is too good to pass up.

A nice story. Only wish there was more!

Very sweet story. Both in his relationship with Padma and Hermione. I loved how when danger struck Padma didnt go looking for him and declare she'd never leave him, that's become cliche, she got Teddy and portkeyed out. Totally what I'd expect that everyone's portkey was set to Potter manor.

That was a cute fic. :) Excellent portrayal of - in my opinion - an under-appreciated pairing. Thanks for writing, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I liked it! Hope you write another soon!

Super story! Loved padma/Harry. And you did really good on the harry/hermoine friendschip!